I absolutely LOVED this! This has got to be one of the best and most original stories I have read in a long time. I even had to get my sister on here to read it...WAY TOO GOOD not to share with those you love!! LOL

Great job!!

I loved it was so funny!

:)

-FangedBeasty

What an insanely fabulous second chapter! Sexy, hilarious, lovely.

I love this how did you come up with this, him i love when he say drity things like that WOOOOOOWWW, THE WAS GREAT.lol

Oooooooooo! I feel like a high school girl again! GRRR! well, if i feel like one, i might as well type like one, ne? lol
Why did you stop it there! Really! It was just getting really really really good! The lemony goodness was about to occur, and no, that little 'diary entry' thing she did, so does not ocunt as a lemon! I think that for the sake of all of your very loyal readers, and all great fanfic lovers and writers, you should contniue with this! Its a great suspense ending, and it just makes us crave more! And you aren't so cruel as to do that, are you? AND! happy birthday to Nicole from me as well! I think i have heard of her before, possibly read one of her stories, if she's made any, of course...i've read so many stories with a wide variety of authors, and i cant possibly remember them all!
TTFN!
joanne

good lord!!! I almost fell off my chair laughing...

Agh, dur you still write. What I meant to say was, keep writing!

Oh, that was HILARIOUS. Absolutely loved it. Hope you still write. Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted

i dont know if you intended for that to be funny but i laughed my head off great writing

Now that was perfect.

That was hilarious omg it was so funny when you talked about the sounds that come from sex I couldnt stop laughing because its so true I've heard from more than one friend on how embarassing that could be lol that was really good I really enjoyed it

wow..that was just wow

Good god! The parody/fantasy was hilarious, but lesson six! Queef comedy! I'm not sure I've ever seen it in a fanfic before.

Very nicely done.

*snort*

WARPED and so very true lol! God bless ya, it still makes me laugh out loud!

Nicely done!

EP

This was even better the second time! LOL More, More!!