| Its an interesting idea but the switches in time makes this story feel choppy. As a reader, I'm constantly jumping around and things don't go very smoothly. It lowers the level of enjoyability. I do look forward to what happens next in this story and also in Embracing Ice.
Ireth Arnatuile- Sat 02 Feb 2008
| A very interesting concept, and judging from your other fics, I'm sure this one will be quite a treat to read. Please continue your wonderful works, they're like gems in an otherwise bland world full of cliche fanfics.
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