| I like the plot of this story. In fact I was, and still am considering responding to the challange and writing my own version of this story when I finish with my own current story. I think you are doing ok so far. But I do think Sess and Kag are a bit OOC. I am interested in seeing how your interpretation goes. So far so good though.
kit kat- Sun 27 Jan 2008
| tell you what for your first fic its coming out pretty good ...sooooooooooo............ WHENSTHENEXTCHAPPY *innocent look*
ITYG- Mon 21 Jan 2008
| luv the beginning hope 2 c new chapters soon
shay- Mon 21 Jan 2008
| wow that was really good i cant wait 4 u 2 update again
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