toxic heart- Mon 09 Jun 2008
this story is great! please keep editting i want to read the next chapter!

toxic heart- Mon 09 Jun 2008
this story is great! please keep editting i want to read the next chapter!

Miko53- Tue 27 May 2008
Lady,
I have been following this story since you started it and I have found it exciting and original. Please accept my encouragement and leave it alone. It is a very, very good one.

Hope to read the finale soon.

blessings

Alicia

Miko53- Tue 27 May 2008
Lady,
I have been following this story since you started it and I have found it exciting and original. Please ccept my encouragement and leave it alone. It is a very, very good one.

Hope to read the finale soon.

blessings

Alicia

Sango-sama- Fri 25 Apr 2008
NOOOO! You cant leave it like that! *cries* I want to know what happens! They need to have kids! I mean think about it Sesshy-poo with pups running around would be to adorable!

tina- Fri 18 Apr 2008
this was a delightful story and although short it was a decent ending

Rinseternalsoul- Fri 18 Apr 2008
Great story! Loved the ending. It was so sweet. Thanks for the read!

~Rin

sesskagluver- Wed 16 Apr 2008
i luved it... i like that sess isnt too sweet at the begining... hope you write more ^_^

Mutnodjmet- Wed 16 Apr 2008
Thank you for the nice story. Looking forward to your next fic.

*hugs and smiles*

kotainuchan- Tue 15 Apr 2008
Aweee it's done now...oh well the next story looks very interesting I cant wait.

Koda- Tue 15 Apr 2008
Great story very imaginative please continue writing i will be glad to read the rdmaining chapters

kotainuchan- Mon 14 Apr 2008
ohhhhhnoooo I hope sesshoumaru is alright :(

Miko53- Sat 12 Apr 2008
Mu Heart is pounding. This is Great!
Looking forward to the next chapter.

K,T,M- Sat 12 Apr 2008
o no poor sesshy T.T i hope u update soon

tina- Thu 10 Apr 2008
I am sooooo loving this fic, I just about flipped out at the panther diva's showing up I love it!!! *squeals * I cant wait to see what else you will have in store for this fic

Lila- Wed 09 Apr 2008
i love this continue writing please!
-Lila

Mutnodjmet- Wed 09 Apr 2008
So let the games begin *grins* now that Katsuro is loose.

I like this story...update soon!

*hugs and smiles*

demon13o- Sun 06 Apr 2008
OMG!!

I loved this chapter!

-Jumps around squealing in joy while accidently knocking the computer mouse over.-

Crap!

-picks the mouse up only to have it slip from her hands shooting towards Lady Sianna like a speeding bullet.-

O.O

DUCK!!

-Watches it faze through the woman.-

What the?

-Stands up only to see the mouse bounce off a wall and smacks her right in the forehead.-

Ohh I see little birdies!

Can you see them too?

-Tries to capture the imaginary birds-

I hope you update soon!

-Walks into a wall misjudging the depth completely-

Ouch...

Do update soon...

Ja Ne!

demon13o- Tue 01 Apr 2008
-Looks at her with a crazy eye.-

You updated, good... it was an excellent chapter, but...

-Yanks out a katana and positions it above her head while glancing at Lady Sianna with a murderous gaze-

You shall update more!

-Runs towards the woman with her sword held out at an angle poised to kill.-

Type now!

-Swings the sword at the woman watching the sword split in half with blood shooting out of it's broken half.-

My sword... you killed him!

-Whines like a little five-year-old-

My baby was murdered!!!

-Looks up at her in tears-

Can you update soon as payment for my broken baby?

Ja Ne

P.S: I hope I made you laugh -Winks-

lunaticneko- Tue 01 Apr 2008
aw... the seen with rin was really cute. I like where you left off the chaptet.

demon13o- Sun 30 Mar 2008
-Grabs the shot gun and aim's it towards Lady Sianna.-

I cannot believe how you ended that chapter.

You are to open up word document and start typing now and end this cliff-hanger this instant.

-Shifts the shot gun giving it a quick click before aiming it for her forhead.-

You will start typing or else!

-Grins evilly.-

Get started, m'am.

-Fire's the gun only to have water shoot out the barrel.-

I had you going didn't I?

Ah well, do hurry and update I'm dying to know what happen's next, oh and I'm watching you on DA as well. ^-^

-Ja Ne!

twitrek- Sat 29 Mar 2008
awww...At least it was a cute cliffhanger. =)

kotainuchan- Sat 29 Mar 2008
JERK....haha just kidding (sorta) :) That was a great chapter, but you did totally leave us hanging. I guess you're just going to have to update super fast to make up for it.

lunaticneko- Wed 26 Mar 2008
That was great. Can't wait to see how she reacts when she finds out he's going with her.

Mutnodjmet- Fri 21 Mar 2008
Very nice reading. I had to catch up because I have not read this story in a while, but I like what I read. This last chapter (19) was nicely written...not overly done on the sex. It was sweet and simple.

Will be looking for more updates...

*hugs and smiles*

kotainuchan- Sat 15 Mar 2008
Humm poooor Sesshoumaru. I think I know what will cure his.... fascination with Kagome. Hehehe Good chapter, please update soon!

lunaticneko- Tue 11 Mar 2008
aw, that was cute. XD

megs- Sat 08 Mar 2008
oh that was just a big mean tease! lol. i hate dreams! good work! I look forward to the next chapter

kotainuchan- Fri 07 Mar 2008
Nooo I didn't think they were going to do it.... hoping yes expecting no.

lunaticneko- Thu 06 Mar 2008
lol! That was GREAT!
I was reading going..no way, this hads gotta be a dream. and then it actually was. XD
I LOVE inner Kagome.

Keonna_BlueMoonInu- Thu 06 Mar 2008
This is a story! Keep up the good work.I wonder what Sesshomaru is going to say next about Kagome's dream.lol

Please update soon!

kotainuchan- Tue 04 Mar 2008
Ohhhhyaaa it's starting to get really good now! Haha, keep up the good work.

ut0pian- Mon 03 Mar 2008
Oh darnit, I thought there was another chapter. I got all excited for nothing. lol Great story. Keep up the great work!!!

Mutnodjmet- Sun 24 Feb 2008
Hmmm...interesting twist of events towards the end of the last chapter.
Me thinks that Sess might have a liking for Kags *grins*

Update soon...*hugs and smiles*

Mutnodjmet- Fri 22 Feb 2008
Very good storytelling. I would have thought Sess would have a little twinge of 'interest' of a liking for Kags by now,however, we will have to wait and see. Being that she has been lonely for a realationship of sorts, I wonder if the attention Tsunjin will obviously be placing upon her, would she have an inkling of responding to him or just blow it him off?
Looking forward to more updates soon...I enjoy this reading.

*hugs and smiles*

kotainuchan- Fri 22 Feb 2008
......oooohhhh are you implying what i think your implying because if you are then wooohoo! haha really the story is interesting so far and I'm eagerly awaiting an update.

kotainuchan- Mon 11 Feb 2008
it's getting really good i can't wait for your next update!

amadoni- Sun 10 Feb 2008
update soon. This fic is very interesting.

kotainuchan- Wed 06 Feb 2008
can't wait to see what happens

Inkasha Taisho- Fri 01 Feb 2008
That was awesome, update soon!!

Inkasha Taisho- Fri 01 Feb 2008
That was awesome, update soon!!

Mutnodjmet- Fri 01 Feb 2008
Very interesting chapter. It was fun to read and the paragraph where Masayo tells Kags the strengths that each of her friends had made a a little tear come to my eye.

Well done.

many *hugs and smiles*

Mutnodjmet- Sun 27 Jan 2008
Midoriko's sister eh, well you're right I didn't see that one coming. Interesting plot twist. I'm looking forward to more updates soon.

I enjoy reading your story.
*hugs and smiles*

kotainuchan- Tue 22 Jan 2008
good soo far

Mutnodjmet- Sun 20 Jan 2008
It does not seem plausible that Ses will be able revive Kag's friends because they have been dead too long. But, anything is possible in the land of fan fiction writing I guess.
I hope they get revived again because it's just so sad for Kagome that they are gone.

Interesting story. Keep up the good work and update soon.

*hugs and smiles*


Mutnodjmet- Thu 17 Jan 2008
I think you are doing okay in keeping Sess in character. I hope you will continue to write more updates to this story.

Keep up the good work...*hugs and smiles*

Mutnodjmet- Wed 16 Jan 2008
Looking forward to your next updates.
Nice beginning and I would like read your rendition of this story to see where it takes us.

Happy writings...*hugs and smiles*

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