| I absolutely love, love , love this story! Please write more!
Ebony- Sun 20 Jan 2008
love this story so far, as for the 'kiki-hoe' thingy yes we all hate her but i think it should be kinky-hoe.
ja ne
| I think you have a good thing going on, and you most definitely have potential. However, you have several grammar errors, and the way your story is formatted makes it harder to read. Would you please consider getting a beta to fix that for you?
tilayha- Sat 12 Jan 2008
ive just started reading this story. i must say i am liking it. there are some typo's and grammar errors but other than that i like how you have put sesshoumaru in disguise. i cant wait to read the rest to see what happens when he reveals himself to the rest of the group!!
tilayha
ashley_kun- Sat 12 Jan 2008
| hey i really like this story and i really don't send alot of reveiws so plz add more chapters asap !!! thanks
hi love it so far can i recive an email whenever you update it would be very welcome if you did love it
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