this story moved a little to fast and there was little to no cherecter development... it was okay but had the potentail to be so much better.

i believe your writing was well worth the hassle.
and i thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
i hope it stays active,since i intend to read it just about every day.

i think that has to be the sweetest fic ive ever read. it was so beautiful. i really like that sesshoumaru fixes his mistakes an not kagome just forgiving and forgetting like most people have her doing in fics. really great i would love to see more like this.