'Kagome, why do you smell funny?' That's rich. Loved it! Please keep writing!
Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted

OMG dat waz very nice and a great one-shot. yeah i k=no dat its a one-shit, but maybe u should do a sequel on it with a full blown lemon and sess is actually there and kags isnt dreaming. that would be very cool!!! :) ^_^ (= ^-^

that was evil..

*chortle* GASP, cough...

Oh my goodness, that was absolutly priceless. I'm glad I've stumbled across your work. These one-shots of yours are wonderful, fresh, and they bring a smile to my face every time. I like your style!

OMG......SO GOOD.....it's really good.......like better than most I've read....lol......your good keep up the good work..lol

that was hilarious. i enjoyed every bit of it.

i loved it it was great just prefect

OMG!! Sequal or continue...do something!!!! PLEASE!?

what no more Come on We need some more!!!!!

Too funny! Especially the very beginning!