LordSesshomaruLover16- Mon 24 Dec 2007
love this story your doing a wonderful job so keep up the good work looking forward to whats going to happen next please update asap dying here to find out what happens next!!!!!

daniela gonzalez- Sun 02 Dec 2007
me so confused first she says koshi to sessy and then she meets toga and now she was posined and that never happen plz make next chapter

TruGemini- Tue 27 Nov 2007
Thanks for the clarity.

vicki patterson- Fri 23 Nov 2007
love it, you are doing a great job. i can not wait to read the next chapter.

Lil Yasha- Thu 22 Nov 2007
i like it this story no better yet i love it. I like everything about it and i can't wait till you up date

Dreaming_oF_Falling- Thu 22 Nov 2007
This chapter was too short. I kind of believe that you dove into her becoming part demon too fast. It would have been better to have done a description of the battle and then a traumatic moment when she falls when she is struck. You could have lengthened the transformation into a struggle- maybe were Kagome fights for control of this new personality. Or that she doesn't realize that she is changing but her friends do. Then it would be good to introduce Sesshomaru and how he realizes who she was.

vicki patterson- Tue 20 Nov 2007
love it, it is a great start, now get busy and write a few really long chapters, please. i hate teaser chapters.
ps. antaganize Inuaysha a lot please.

Lilith- Tue 20 Nov 2007
Huh! Interesting outcome...I'm quite curious as to the next coming events.

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