I congratulate you on making a lemony fresh fic. Although, I would prefer that you would separate the dialog from the paragraphs. It would be easier to read. However, it is your choice. ^^; Another thing, Sesshomaru was a bit....off, I would say.
Quote, " I fear of what he might do." End quote.
Uhm, Sessho does not fear anyone. He's more of a, 'defy me I'll kill/torture you' or 'touch what is mine and you'll never see another day', kind of person. Yet again that's just me and purely your choice on this matter, since you are the author. 8]]]

Besides that, I like this fic. And I won't mind reading it again. :]]]]

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?