amazing...that's all i can say...amazing
your descriptions were perfect, and the idea was great! brava!

interesting, please update soon, i would like to see where this goes!

it's a great story, but could you maybe do a follow-up chapter? cuz i'm confused about whether the girl in the dream was kagome or just some random girl. and was it something that he actually did or just thought about doing?

tour de force...Brava! Sometimes eloquent simplicity is everything. A pefect ten.

That was a good little oneshot I like it. You do have to wonde if he eve would have night terrors about the way things could have gone.

holy khrap! that was good
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