hurry!!!!!!!! PLEZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!and make the chapters longer, I can't wait to see what happens next.

I thought it was really good.i dont now if i could write that good but i can draw pretty well to bad i dont have a scanner i could give u pictures of kagome and sesshomaru.I cant tell if your a girl or guy because mostly you can tell because of how u write.

Knights in Shining Amour? Amour French for love, romance etc. Armor/armour the protective, usually metal plates, etc used by warriors of all kinds. You also gave Lady Chinatsu 2 different hair colors, warm orange & pastel green in chapter 8. Another thing, your means belonging to whoever, as in your keys, the keys belong to you whoever you happens to be, you're on the other hand is a contraction of most usually you are, so if you are doesn't fit don't use you're. You also seem to have a typo of prefect which is some kind of English school title instead of perfect. Hope these corrections help, the plot is good it's just the grammar/word choice that is spotty in places. Umm, if you want I could possibly beta this for you since the chapters are fairly short. I just threw a bunch of things I noticed from the various chapters in this 1 review, I'm up to chapter 10 or so & I just started reading this tonight.

hey again! i've loved the next new chapter in the story, but in the last story you asked what do you think about the new twist? you wanna know what i think? i think its...pretty good, it was totally unexpectant and everything and kind of...weird. not someting i'd expect in the plot, but you said you were getting bored with the plot but i've got a question. when is kagome going to return back to the fuedal era? isn't she supposed to go back? i mean it's kinda frustrating, i thought she'd be going back by now but now your starting a while other new thing and saying your bored with the plot. i'm not trying to be bratty or mean or anything, but don't you tink the plot would be more interesting if you make her go back to the fuedal era? she was supposed to go to her home in the future to heal mentally, and she has acheived that. so i thought that's when kagome was going to go back to the fuedal era, because it was said earlier in the story that ounce she's 'healed' she would go back and then return back to the modern era so that she could be with the modern day sesshoumaru,
do you get it, cause i just said alot of crap there. well anyways i still love this story alot and i'm glad you've finally updated...i'm looking foreward to that youkai underground stuff by the way...hopefully after THAT she will return back to the fuedal era, i think she should!

poor kagome..

now how the hell is she going to get out of this?..

Ok, edge of seat here, ....I''ve read it all the way to this point with only a couple of "get away from the computer now" breaks.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please hurry!!!!!!!!!! when I saw that you had updated I almost screamed at my mom to get off the computer!!!!!!! ;)

great story I hope u can add the next chapter cause the suspense is killing me. What going to happen next?

thank you for accepting my criticism. the addition of multi-purpose chain is better, much better! maybe she should be able to chose to keep it? well, it's your fic and i like it whatever you decide. can't wait for more. ta!

holy shit...this was awsome!!!!...more chapters please!!

kagome has become a pathetic pet, worse than an animal, and she still allows that damn collar on! please, please tell me you're going to change those things. i hope this doesn't sound like a flame, because it isn't. i really do like the fic. i hope you update soon.

Its the Tom and Jerry show!!!!!

Its the Tom and Jerry show!!!!!

Its the Tom and Jerry show!!!!!

I was wondering If InuYasha would ever show up again. But he dosen't strike me as a buisness man. I like how you brought him back in though.

umm/hello/im/using/this/slash/thingy/because/well/my/spacebar/doesnt/work/ok/anyways/gosh/i/really/am/
mad/sesshou/did/he/have/to/be/so/mean/like/you/could've/used/another
method/to/make/her/subit/if/iwere/
her/i/wouuldnt/care/about/the/pain./i/mean/that's/practiall/disgraceful/
you/know/nut.anyways/you're/
great/so/far/ima/continue/reading/
but/really/the/grammer/its/alright/im/
not/a/major/perfect/spelling/freak/so/as/long/as/i/can/read/it/or/understand/anyways/yeah...

JaNe!!!

It's Tom and Jerry!!!!! lol

It's Tom and Jerry!!!!! lol

It's Tom and Jerry!!!!! lol

It's Tom and Jerry!!!!! lol

the is Tom and Jerry. I've seen just about every episode. I was a BIG fan when I was younger never missed it. lol

the is Tom and Jerry. I've seen just about every episode. I was a BIG fan when I was younger never missed it. lol

the is Tom and Jerry. I've seen just about every episode. I was a BIG fan when I was younger never missed it. lol

the is Tom and Jerry. I've seen just about every episode. I was a BIG fan when I was younger never missed it. lol

the is Tom and Jerry. I've seen just about every episode. I was a BIG fan when I was younger never missed it. lol

i hope u update the story soon i was not expecting that inuyasha will be partners with fluffy i wonder when inuyasha and kagome meet what will happen please please please update the story soon

i hope u update the story soon i was not expecting that inuyasha will be partners with fluffy i wonder when inuyasha and kagome meet what will happen please please please update the story soon

can i just tell you...that this story totally rocks on ice?! its really REALLY good, and so well written! your such a telented author, and a REALLY funny one too! in every chapter i'm always laughing, i kind of feel bad that kagome's psychologically screwed up though, but i hope she'll heal soon.
your last chapter was awesome by the way, keep it up!

~LilacFairy

Damn Girl! this is one hell of a story!
and thoroughly enjoyable, even though Kagome has more insecurities than I do! Please keep up the good work, it is going to get interesting now that Inuyasha is making an appearance! ( i am assuming it is Inuyasha)
Till next time Fubi

i love this story please update as soon as you can.

this is awesome!!..more chapters please!!...

I don't want to sound rude but doesn't she have to end up with the modern one, because in her time he doesn't have her and if she stayed in the past then he would have had her. I think thats the what i'm trying to say. 3 am and no sleep for me. LOL. Sorry maybe she changes the modern world as we know it. well can't wait to see what happens next.

hugs and puppies

this was to funny!!!....i love the two chapters ....poor kagome...turning an imtersting shade of blue as seshhy but it...i was ;aughing so much also at the part where she scares the poor little demon...way to funny...more chapters please!!

I love your story! I extremely love your latest update, that was hilarious!

i'm so glad that u update and ti was really funny i hope u update soon

this fic is good.
i'm awaiting impatiently for the next chapter.
plz plz dont let hanako do sumthing to bad to kagome i really dont want her to experience more grief plz and thank u.

i luv this fic so far! and i like how you write=D please update!!

I love the story line and can hardly wait to read more

i hope u update the story soon i really think that the story is funny and romantic i hope u update the story soon

Oh mean author leaving that cliffie!!!! Seriously loved the story line and an am eagerly awaiting the next installment!

come on more chapters please!!!

I love how you wrote this. ^_^ The next chapter looks like it'll be intersting. >. can't wait!

wow...this an awsome story!!..its funny and awsome!!..more chapters please!!...sesshys a little posesive!!..hehehe...funny..but love it...inu is a basterd...die..more chapters please!!..and thank you!!