| Yahoo!!! They're finally together!. I'm glad he scared Kikyou. Her father is heartless. Now begins their adventure together to regain his lands.
Sicilia- Tue 15 Apr 2008
| Yes!!!!!!1 Fly away!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Chapter , really good, i couldn't believe it when i saw you had update :)
Sicilia- Tue 15 Apr 2008
| Yes!!!!!!1 Fly away!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Chapter , really good, i couldn't believe it when i saw you had update :)
elvira- Sat 12 Apr 2008
| upstae!...please!
This Was Such a Cliche Chapter. But That's Alright. It Was Still Really Good!!!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!
Kagome-Chan
Hinata- Fri 11 Apr 2008
| You know, you never fail to amaze me. And not once have I ever been disappointed by any of the ten chapters I read. If anything, I'm always wanting more because, you have skills and know how capture the readers attention. So please update soon! I can't wait to read more! Later!
Hinata- Fri 11 Apr 2008
| You are the best damn author ever! And this is the most beautifully written, Sesshomaru and Kagome story I have read in a long while.
Hinata- Fri 11 Apr 2008
| That so evil... What would I have done if you chose to Slavery at this chapter. Well, there isn't much I do. I mean, I would have so disappointed, and totally left longing for more. But even if I would have begged you for more, in the end it all up to you to decide when to this. Still I'm glad you didn't here! Oh, I can't to read the next chapter! Later! And awesome job as always!
Hinata- Fri 11 Apr 2008
| I know not all stories have a happy ending but I hope this does. I love it and with each chapter I found myself wanting more and more.
Hinata- Fri 11 Apr 2008
| Awesome!
Kristim- Fri 11 Apr 2008
| Cass, I'm glad you got that chapter up. Yay! I'm glad it turned out all right in the end. (Well, the story isn't over yet!) But anyways, isn't that what love is supposed to be about - putting the other person ahead of yourself. Way to go Cassie!
Kristi )- Thu 10 Apr 2008
| Cass, I'm glad you got that chapter up. Yay! I'm glad it turned out all right in the end.
Hinata- Thu 10 Apr 2008
| Hello, it's me again. Man, poor Kagome and Sesshomaru! I feel bad for both of them...oh yeah, I wanted to tell you, I think you have captured Sesshomaru and Kagome feelings beautifully. And I love all the detail you have put into this too. Bye!
Hinata- Thu 10 Apr 2008
| Has anyone ever told you, that you have real gift for story tell? If not they should have because you do and if you write a novel I'd so buy it. I loved chapter two, and just wanted you know how much I enjoyed it.
Hinata- Thu 10 Apr 2008
| Wow! This first chapter of Slavery was so amazing, I simply loved it.
caitlyn- Fri 21 Mar 2008
| This was the best fanfic ive ever read and trust me i hav read them all. Please oh PLEASE write the rest of the story im dying to know what happens!!!!!!!!!!
hannah- Sun 16 Mar 2008
| OMG awesome fanfic. PLEASE DO THE NEXT CHAPTER PLZ I WANNA KNOW WAT HAPPENS AFTER SESSHOUMARU APPEARS AT THE GATE! =( *cry* ='(
Awwww!!!! He Came Back!! I Hope He's Come 4 Her! C: Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!
Kagome-Chan
katie- Sun 16 Mar 2008
i love this story please update the next chapter FAST
elvira- Thu 13 Mar 2008
NO!!!...please!....update!.....
You tricked me!....lol...please!...update soon!
kitsune-bot- Thu 13 Mar 2008
Oh my god, I seriously thought "the end" was really the end! My heart was very sad. hahaha.
I can't quite put my finger on it but there's something so achingly sweet about this fanfiction. It always brightens my day when I see an update for it.
I'm really excited about Sesshoumaru returning. I hope he kicked Naraku's ass outta the west and is returning to get his lady! Cha!
I'm curious to see if Inuyasha will make an appearance? Perhaps some sort of second arch of tracking him down. OR maybe Kikyo has him!
Hope to see more soon!
Aww.. you had me all excited to know why Sesshoumaru showed up with two people! Is he captured? coming to rescue her?! Omg tell me! -freaks out-
...sorry...update when you can!
sweetest angel- Wed 12 Mar 2008
| Please oh please update really really soon!!! I don't know how long I will be able to wait!!!!!!!
hope_midnight- Wed 12 Mar 2008
| This is great! I'll be awaiting your update...
Aurora- Wed 12 Mar 2008
| YAY you updated. ^-^ Plz update again.
Holysinner- Tue 11 Mar 2008
Dude this fic rocked!!! i luved how cute Sesshy and Kags were together!!! Oh and by the way you nearly gave me a heart attack when it said "The End."! i cant believe you did that!(so cruel) but i loed that Kagome set him free. i cant wait until the next chappie ^.^
please update soon or ill go crazy! (seriously).
your fan,
Holysinner
SabakuMoon- Tue 11 Mar 2008
| GREAT!! I been qaiting for this story to be updated. LOVE! SESS came to Kagome.
snowbird- Tue 11 Mar 2008
| Please, please, please!!! Don't say he's a slave again and that's why her father is smirking. She set him free! I'd like to think he's back because of her and maybe to make some kind of deal with her father for his aid in regaining his lands? I can only hope. If he is a slave again, I'll cry and how was he overpowered. He's suppose to be a very powerful youkai without the collar. I know Naraku was responsible the first time. You've got me anxious and I can't wait!
Aurora- Tue 11 Mar 2008
| You have no idea how i felt when i read 'The End'. I was so shocked and angred I almost cried. I know it may sound stupid, but that is how much I love your story. Update Soon!!
Sicilia- Tue 11 Mar 2008
| ahhhhhhhhhhhh the pain the pain, how can i continue living without the next chapter???? hahah greagt endings but man are you cruel
Sicilia- Tue 11 Mar 2008
| ahhhhhhhhhhhh the pain the pain, how can i continue living without the next chapter???? hahah greagt endings but man are you cruel
Arielle- Tue 11 Mar 2008
| I love this tory! N pleeeease i beg of u update asap ur doin such a wonderful job! Thanks
dsm1980- Tue 11 Mar 2008
| Pleeeeeaze!!! Update sooooon!!! It's cruel to leave us with a cliffy like that ;)
Jessica- Tue 11 Mar 2008
| Please don't let Sesshomaru be returning as a slave...that would be so disappointing. Anyway, your story is good, can't wait for the update.
Jessica- Tue 11 Mar 2008
| Please don't let Sesshomaru be returning as a slave...that would be so disappointing. Anyway, your story is good, can't wait for the update.
| update update update... i almost freaked when i saw the 'the end'... don't do that...... phew... glad that you were kidding.... update soon please... thanks
fantasysmellsbetter- Wed 05 Mar 2008
ok its been like 4ever!!! since u have updated woman!!!!!!
wright more now!!!
please =D
elvira- Sat 01 Mar 2008
Please!....countinue!...i was looking for this story couldn't find it...lol...!!!!!
please!,,,updatde!
elvira- Sat 01 Mar 2008
Please!....countinue!...i was looking for this story couldn't find it...lol...!!!!!
please!,,,updatde!
elvira- Sat 01 Mar 2008
Please!....countinue!...i was looking for this story couldn't find it...lol...!!!!!
please!,,,updatde!
elvira- Sat 01 Mar 2008
Please!....countinue!...i was looking for this story couldn't find it...lol...!!!!!
please!,,,updatde!
elvira- Sat 01 Mar 2008
Please!....countinue!...i was looking for this story couldn't find it...lol...!!!!!
please!,,,updatde!
birning ice- Fri 22 Feb 2008
| I love your story! The last pat was soooo sad! Please up-date soon!!! :)
SarahhhBoo- Sat 02 Feb 2008
AHHHHH *SCREAMS* AHHHHH *SCREAMS MORE*
ohh my freakin goodness!!!
5 words...more more MORE MORE M-O-R-E!!!!!!!
lol yeah please wright more SOON!!
i luv this story it is amazing!
toots- Tue 08 Jan 2008
Hi. It's a really good story. I enjoyed it a lot. At the end of chapter 7 was it? Yea I really thought that was the end but I read your comment. I was thinking damn that would've been cold if you just ended it there.
But anyways it's a really good story. I was kinda sad that he just left right after he kissed her. Some first kiss. I mean I like opening my eyes to see his when I kiss someone. It's so romantic. But he just up and left. Can you explain that in the next chapter?
Alright well good luck on making the next one. I do hope it's soon. ok. ^_^~buh byes
Kristin- Thu 03 Jan 2008
| I'm glad it's not the end!! I was like, "What??? No!!" Darling, you never write stories that end like this! Heehee... I'm glad it's not over. *sigh*
Kara- Wed 02 Jan 2008
| Awww. I loved it. Please update soon.
Kat- Sun 30 Dec 2007
OMG! I cannot tell you how much i love this story! Review soon!
~Kat
sola- Fri 28 Dec 2007
| so he is free'd, eh? Looking forward to the next chapter.
dreamer789- Thu 27 Dec 2007
| OH MY GOD!!!!!! i thought that was the end and i was like "NO! HOW COULD...NO!!!!!" oh please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next. please dont leave me here waiting for to long. im addicted i need to know what happens next.
snowbird- Sat 22 Dec 2007
| I know I did a review on 12/20 but I just reread the last update again and had to add more. I wish they had made love instead of just a kiss before he left. boohoo. Also it seemed as though he wasn't as concerned about her possible future with Naraku after being so protective of her previous to this. Of course, he was shocked and excited at being free, but still, it just didn't seem right for him to not have any mental thoughts of her and Naraku together. He just left her without any mental thoughts of ever seeing her again. I'm not a happy fan with Sess at the moment. He'd better get on my good side again.
Violetcarson- Sat 22 Dec 2007
OMG!!!! I almost started hyperventilating when I read that part!!!!! YOU ARE EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Utterly cruel!!! But I still liked the chapter, even thought they're both in denial, and its really annoying!!!! DANGIT!!!! We really need some heartfelt confessions, preferably in the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Good job, and keep writing!!!!!
Please update soon! I want to see what happens next. Ooooh! The tension...
--Adria Li
Anna- Fri 21 Dec 2007
| I love this story and i seriously want 2 find out what really happens!!!!
bre- Fri 21 Dec 2007
give me more. come on don't end it like that
snowbird- Thu 20 Dec 2007
| I am SO GLAD that ASS is back in business and thank you for the update. I love this story. I am so glad she freed him. Now we just need to keep her from being forced to marry Naraku. Maybe her mother can persuade her father to break off with him. If he loves his daughter, then he needs to do the decent thing. Let's throw a mud pie at Kikyo. Let's see her try to buy him now. I wonder how Sesshoumaru is going to go about taking back the Western Lands. Maybe find Inuyasha and team up with him? And what about his father and stepmother?
| hey that was an evil trick! I love this story and i was almost in tears when i saw that it was the end. Hope to see more chapters soon
toni- Thu 20 Dec 2007
| *anime tears* i love this story! although Naruku gone is a bit...
Saeko- Thu 20 Dec 2007
Oh dont you DARE!!!!! That cant be the end, it would suck!
Well, it was well written, but you know what I mean. I WANT A HAPPY ENDING DAMMIT!
| That was so mean. Good chapter!
Vicious Grin- Wed 19 Dec 2007
OH MY GOSH! IF YOU ENDED IT THEN, grrrr....
hahahaha
but yes, please continue!!
Emina- Wed 19 Dec 2007
I am completly in LOVE with your story lol. I log in everyday hopeing for a new chapter =) If that really was the end I would be pretty pissed off lol and then I would demand a sequal! The chapter was pretty short but sweet. I really hope he comes back =(
Update soon! Thanks =)
kiki- Wed 19 Dec 2007
| i love it are you going to have sesshomaru ask her mom if he can marry kagome o and if you do end it here i will be very sad and problely cry my self to sleep and then turn emo so please update soon or i will cry (and turn emo)
Lady Arinna- Wed 19 Dec 2007
HEY PLEASE DON"T MAKE THIS THE END COME ON HE HAS TO COME BACK FOR HER!!!!! THIS CAN'T BE THE FINAL PLEASE POST AT LEAST A EPILOGUE
anon- Wed 19 Dec 2007
| OMG!!! when i read The End i was about to start screaming at my computer that it couldnt be the end because he couldnt leave her forever. i was so glad when i read your a/n at the bottom, cant wait for more. this is one of my favorite stories!
sunset Love- Wed 19 Dec 2007
| More please. I want to know what happens. Who does kagome marry? What happens to sesshoumaru when he returns to his lands? and many more please update asap. PLEASE
sunset Love- Wed 19 Dec 2007
| More please. I want to know what happens. Who does kagome marry? What happens to sesshoumaru when he returns to his lands? and many more please update asap. PLEASE
Trice- Wed 19 Dec 2007
| That was soooooooooo cold. I was like I know that it didn't end like that. I enjoyed the chapter but I felt that you should have both of them be a little more honest with each other concerning their feelings. I guess it gives the story more drama and makes us look forward to reading more of the story. I look forward to reading your next chapter.
Woo!!!! YAY!! KISSES! It's About Bloody Time!!!! (Laugh) I LOVE IT!! PLEASE Update As Soon As U Can!
Luv,
Kagome-Chan ♪
Dh7- Wed 19 Dec 2007
| Don't you dare end it at this. >_> It's like heartstraining... I kinda wanted them to wake up to each other's feelings post kiss
Rein Manson- Mon 12 Nov 2007
| OMG PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE VERYYYYYYYYYYY SOON
| this is a really good story, please update soon...
angelina- Wed 07 Nov 2007
| AAWWWEEE!!! that was soo sad!! i got all teary eyed!! i feel so stupid but it was soo good!! please update soon and fast!!
sesshys1-n-only- Fri 02 Nov 2007
| i love this story and cant wait for the next chapter! update soon.
lolla- Sun 28 Oct 2007
| i love this story!! i`ve been waitng so long for you to do the next chapter please hurry with te next one i can`t wait to read what happens next! i hope sesshy gets his land back he seems so out of character without it
snowbird- Sat 20 Oct 2007
| I like this story. I just wish Kag would just up and sneak away with Sess to help him get his lands back. During this quest they meet up with Inuyasha and the others. Of course, during all this time Naraku is after them. Somehow her being a miko and the jewel would be worked into it. You've got my imagination working overtime. However you write the story, I'm sure it will be good. I just wish Kag would stop being so submissive, become defiant and somehow get away from her parents and Naraku. She's too weak. You are going to make her stronger, aren't you? I hope so. I'm one of those 'I am woman, hear me roar' type of females and I like to read stories where the heroine is strong. Anyway, enough of my ranting. Please update soon!
AMG!!!! I Think We're Getting Closer....(Laugh) I Hope They Get 2gether!! Please Update Soon! Thanks!!!!
Chu!!
Kagome-Chan ♪
Violetcarson- Wed 17 Oct 2007
| Aww!! Cute!!! Sad, but cute nonetheless!!!!!!! I just hope something happens between them soon!!!!!
| I love this fic. Please update soon. The suspence is killing me. :P
Arielle langley- Wed 17 Oct 2007
| Oh my gosh what can i say that was so good! Please do continue the story love it!
Vicious Grin- Tue 16 Oct 2007
| damn kikyo! she has to ruin everything, doesnt she? lol
elvira- Tue 16 Oct 2007
this is awseome!!!...more chapters please!
Kristin- Sat 06 Oct 2007
| Really good story. I think I've been waiting for the next chapter for about a month now!!! Darling, my little cat lady, when is it coming? *sigh* I need closure!!
I Loved That Chapter!! PLEASE Update As Soon As U Can!
Thanks!!!!
Kagome-Chan ♪
Black Widow- Sun 16 Sep 2007
I LOVE the story please update soon.
PS:Ihope Naraku and Kikio die in the end but thats just me.
This story is really good!
I can`t wait to read what happens next, though I hope that Naraku will take Kikyo with him, disappear and never come back... And that Kagome´s parents will let her marry Sesshoumaru! Oh, but that`s just me. ^_^
I also like the way you describe Kagome and Sesshoumaru`s relationship.
Please, update soon!
Ana- Thu 16 Aug 2007
| Aw, crud, now what?! Hope he falls off a cliff and dies, nyahahaha!! Sorry, I hate Naraku with a passion. Exept that one fic I read, but I won't go into detail. Anyhow, please update soon! Ja ne!!
niki- Tue 14 Aug 2007
| nice chappie! u should review more often, i can't wait to see what happens next. please please please hurry
kutelilasiangurl- Tue 14 Aug 2007
omg please update and soon i wanna find out whats gonna happen anyway keep up the good work love ya work
~*klag*~
elvira- Tue 14 Aug 2007
| this is awesome!!!...more chapters please!!!...i have been waiting a long time for this story!!
| oh god, I'm going to be waiting in suspense even moreso!!!
OhBrother- Tue 31 Jul 2007
| UPDATE SOON!! i love this story! i want to know more!
| please write more!!! please please please
sola- Wed 25 Jul 2007
| This is not a new chapter.....shame on you for not updating, keeping us waiting forever! Bad Maru, Bad!
Inkasha Tashio- Wed 25 Jul 2007
| Please update soon!! The suspense in killing me!! Will Kagome set Sesshomaru free and flee to the wilds together or will the suffer in silence? Oh the curiosity!!!
| So far I like it alot its very good. Keep up the good work
renusuru- Mon 23 Jul 2007
| right more please *.* it rocks
| Wow, that would really suck, to be free yet not free. Naraku? Ew that is just gross, the story is good other then Naraku being the one she is betrothed to, that is just... yuck!
mickiressa- Sun 08 Jul 2007
| I'd cringe too Naraku is just hmm what's the word for it oh yeah evil, so evil in fact that the almighty Sesshomaru cringes at the mention of his name. Rum for the hills Kagome run for the hills. Overall it's a great story and I hope you continue to update.
aleerasuru- Fri 06 Jul 2007
| keep righting suspence is killing me
aleerasuru- Fri 06 Jul 2007
| keep righting suspence is killing me
Demon951- Thu 05 Jul 2007
| I love it so far please continue!
klag- Tue 03 Jul 2007
| omg now you've got me hooked please update
inukamisashi- Tue 03 Jul 2007
| More! more! more! ^^,
AMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Update As Soon As U Can!! At First I Thought the Idea of This Story Was a little Strange, But After a While I Was Like 'Well, Y Not Just Try It?' I Did and I LOVE IT! So Please Continue It!!!! ^_^
Peace, Luv, and Slaves,
Kagome-Chan
Sicilia- Tue 03 Jul 2007
| HAHHA of course it had to be Naraku....... great chapter, update soon
Slm_candle- Mon 02 Jul 2007
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not Naraku! NOOOOOO I don;'t want that wahhhhhhhh lol update but seriously don't let kags bed him okay that's sooooooooooooooooooooo gross
CelesPrye- Mon 02 Jul 2007
Not many people could pull off this story line well, but I really aprove and like the way you are writing it ^_^
Please come out with the next chapter soon and I am in earnest =)
~Celes Prye
awesome chapter!
I hope you get situated in your new place!
Ja Ne!
SarahhhBoo- Mon 02 Jul 2007
| I LOVED IT! it doesn't matter if it was a filling chapter it was awsome! please wright more soon
elvira- Mon 02 Jul 2007
| poor kagome!!!..she and him are tortureing them selves...more chapters please!!!
Ana- Sun 01 Jul 2007
| crap!! Aw man?! NARAKU!!! Why him?! guess it fits the story... Hope this has a happy ending... Update soon! You did a great job on the last chapter!
| Awesome chapter! But...dun dun dun, bad Naraku. Poor Sesshy and Kagome. T_T Keep up the great work, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^
Sicilia- Sat 30 Jun 2007
| this is a great story... hope you update soon
Sicilia- Sat 30 Jun 2007
| this is a great story... hope you update soon
Sicilia- Sat 30 Jun 2007
| this is a great story... hope you update soon
loveyaa1210- Fri 29 Jun 2007
| I really enjoyed your story and can't wait to see or read what is going to happen next. Im a little confused on the whole protective feeling causing him to push away but i will def be here to figure it out (*smiles*)
| I really like this fic. I hope you are able to update soon! ^_^ Keep up the awsome job!
Marufan- Thu 28 Jun 2007
| i love this story very original the cahracters are portrayed nicely and the story has an even tone, good job hope to read more of this soon.
Cosmos Writer- Thu 28 Jun 2007
| LOVE it! i have read stories like this before but this is by far the best one yet. it really is coming together. only one thing that i would like to see is a relationship that does not build quiet as quickly between sessy and kags, sessy was tortured and bought and tortured again and because of this i believe he should be a bit more hateful and distrusting in the beginning. but anyway just a suggestion. keep writing i am looking forward to reading the rest.
fallen_angel- Wed 27 Jun 2007
| Great so far! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next update :o)
Nikki- Wed 27 Jun 2007
| MORE MORE MORE!!! I'm loving it so far!! This last chapter was really good... I love how you made Sesshoumaru feel bad about touching her because of how pure she is!!! More Please!!!!
Ana- Wed 27 Jun 2007
| Aw man, I though for sure I'd already reviewed this! Anyhow, Please update soon! Please?! Thank you!!
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