oh plllllease update soon

i hope u update soon cause i have to know wha happens

i like that it doesn't start before the defeat of naraku, like so many i have read; gave background info., brief and to the point, though it left quite a bit unexplained. anyhow, i like it. i hope you finish it.
~Trihn
p.s.: you could use a little more proof reading. bye, bye.

please write more i like your story.... it was kind of funny...so please write more

Update soon, i can not wait to ready where you are going with this.

Hey chica don't you dare stop i just read it and i at least like it so please post soon. OK

hugs and puppies