Megan Consoer- Thu 15 Nov 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Kagome-Chan- Thu 01 Nov 2007
That Was An AMAZING Story! Thank U SO MUCH 4 Writing It. I Luved It!!!!

Luv,

Kagome-Chan ♪

elvira- Sun 28 Oct 2007
this was awsome!!!!

i loved this story!

thankyou thankyou!!


Any9- Sun 28 Oct 2007
Simply the most perfect and beautifull ending.

snowbird- Sat 27 Oct 2007
I have enjoyed this delightful comedy. As I mentioned in a previous review regarding all the little details during her pregnancies, I also got a kick out of the diaper changing incident. I laughed as I pictured it in my mind and was a reminder of many diaper changes that I have done many years ago. I was sorry to see the end of the story. I hope you don't mind me asking about another of your stories at this site. I'm referring to "Fall Into Rut". I am so entranced with that story and hope that you can return to it and add more updates. It has not been updated since 8/21. It is on my favorites list, as this one was, and I check it daily. Please don't abandon it.

Sokai- Sat 27 Oct 2007
Beautiful!!!

JadedInu- Sat 27 Oct 2007
Absolutely adored this story!!!!!!


reina- Sat 27 Oct 2007
hahahaha omg, this line is priceless!!!

But he wasn't complaining, he was just happy his pup was healthy. He would have loved him even if he had been like other hanyous and was, less than attractive.


it made me laugh :]

Nikki- Sat 27 Oct 2007
WOW. I really liked what you did with the story. I wish there were some more detail in the later years of their life but the story still rocked. I also like how you made Sesshomaru not so sure of him self in the bed room. That was great. There are so many that have him being great at everything. But I think with what you did gave him some depth. Good job. I just can't help what happen to InuYasha? Or did Kikyo drag him to hell even if she was alive? Oh well Thank you for your hard work. Oh and thank hubby too for the help. Itr is nice to see people working as a team and getting the guys POV.

Kagome-Chan- Sat 27 Oct 2007
I've Read Your Whole Story So Far 2day and I luv It!!!! U Describe Everything Perfectly!! Please Update As Soon As U Can! And Your Husband Must Have Gotten Quite Bored 2 Have 2 'Suggest' Food 2 U Like That!!!! (Laugh)

Luv,

Kagome-Chan ♪

RainStorm- Fri 26 Oct 2007
I really enjoyed the update. Please keep up the good work and thank you for making her pregnancy so real. All of her symptoms where on point. I hope this story isn't going to be ending to soon. Please follow up on how they handle parenthood. Terrible 2's and all that!

Arc-an angel- Thu 25 Oct 2007
wonderful, just loves how you have the family interact with sesshomaru and he with them

snowbird- Tue 16 Oct 2007
I absolutely loved this these chapters dealing with her pregnancy. You went into more detail than any other author I've read that had Kag pregnant. I like all those little details. They were precious, sweet, cute, and funny. Also, I like how you've portrayed Kag's and Sess's characters, especially Sess. Picture this---his son nursing one breast while Sess is nursing the other. hahahaha The part about the craving suggestion is absolutely priceless. I'm anxious to know what the baby looks like.

elvira- Tue 16 Oct 2007
i feel bad for the doctors...more chapters please!!..o and damn souta is slick!..

Moon Mage Goddess- Tue 16 Oct 2007
Persistant, but very admirable - he is devoted to you!

And this is a wonderful chapter! I am still following and in love with this story. It makes it all the more better when you include true parts of your life.

Very well written! I can not wait for more!
~Sandreline

Aya-Chan- Sun 23 Sep 2007
i'm loving thr story so far. and can't wait to see what happens.
i have my figers crossed that they're going to run into Kagomes old friends when they are in her time.
i can't wait to see what you do next!!

Sokai- Fri 21 Sep 2007
I just love it and i want to know what happens next!!

MiMi- Mon 17 Sep 2007
ummmm; ""Sesshoumaru goes into heat during mating season and rapes Kagome. Now she’s pregnant and wants nothing to do with him. Should Sesshoumaru respect her wishes and leave her unguarded while she carries his heir? ""

Kagome wants nothing to do with Sesshomaru but it looks like she is falling for him.Ummmmm The title "I dont want to mate" wow, so different for others but now, Kagome is falling for him.

it gets boring because she is falling in love with him. make kagome fight.

v1cky84- Mon 17 Sep 2007
Love this chapter. Please update soon. Thanks ;)

demonlordlover- Mon 17 Sep 2007
It wasn't confusing at all. The transitions were clearly marked, and you alluded to how much time had passed in each new frame.

I liked the garden scene the best, I think. It implied a great deal of trust on Kagome's part to be willing to do something like that in the open for him. (Not to mention the fact that he wasn't shy about asking for something that he wanted.)

With the mention of what could go wrong with the birth, I wonder if something will happen with the doctor. Then again, you said there will only be two more chapters. One can only hope that in one of them, Sada (sp) will get her just desserts.

Any9- Mon 17 Sep 2007
I love it, I love it, I love it sooooo much. Just 2-3 chapters iai, I can hardly wait to see how is everything going to be. Please update as sooner as you can.

sleepy tuna fish- Mon 17 Sep 2007
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! At first, I was a bit apprehensive about your characterizations of Kagome and Sesshoumaru, but in the end, they came out quite nicely. More please :)

animelover21- Sun 16 Sep 2007
I love it! I can't wait to see if the baby's a girl or a boy!!

KawaiiDemons- Sun 16 Sep 2007
I simply love your story. I read the whole thing today and was instantly hooked. I can wait until you update it. The way you make the couple deal with their different culture is very rare to see. So far, I've never seen another author make Sess compromise and show so much emotion. I like it. Good luck with this and update soon.

~KawaiiDemons

Sessygurl- Sun 16 Sep 2007
i cant wait for kags to tell him she loves him. update soon!

Aniasessho, Sesshy's and Inu's lil sis- Fri 10 Aug 2007
I loved it! I can't wait for more!^.^
Do you read yaoi?

MorningStar- Tue 07 Aug 2007
this chapter was wonderful, i love her "duties" and how she finally got around to saying what she liked.
and i do so enjoy the last lines of this chapter.
please update soon! have a happy tuesday!
Morning

Any9- Mon 06 Aug 2007
Loved the duties.
Loved the chapter, please update soon.

elvira- Sun 05 Aug 2007
wow..this was awsome!!!..more chapters please!!

Mutnodjmett a.k.a judzea- Sun 05 Aug 2007
I love this story...it's just too sexy.
Can't wait for more updates so please do update soon.
Where is Rin and Shippou? Did you mean to leave them out...I know you made mention of Shippou in the beginning just before Kags & Sess went to her time. Why does she not have him with her now?

Great story and nicely done :-)


Raceen_Ecstasy- Sun 05 Aug 2007
That was the sexiest chapter ever, they are so cute together! I just love your story, keep it coming.

Chaos_Queen77- Sat 04 Aug 2007
Bravo! Just as the last chapter was good this one was better. Please keep up your hard work and post another chapter soon.

Chaos

TIAN- Sat 04 Aug 2007
VERY GOOD INDEED!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLZ

jessica- Tue 31 Jul 2007
...u gotta finish..i cant wait..so far it's really good ! ! !.please finish soon:)

Kanazawa- Sat 28 Jul 2007
wonderful story!! I can't wait for more!

Kheylia- Tue 10 Jul 2007
Amazing. You're doing wonderful. Keep it up, please update soon. :]

Tempest- Tue 10 Jul 2007
I really enjoy this fic. Could you please e-mail me whenever you update? Thanks

RainStorm- Tue 10 Jul 2007
I am really enjoying this story. I have one request however, and that is, "Since Fluffy's youki and Kagome's reiki are joining can you they aquire new combined powers, both unique and alike?" PLEASE!!!, PLEASE!!!, PLEASE!!!
Oh, yeah and let the baby join them in that gift. Please consider this, that would be soooooo cooool!
Thanks

whiteinu1- Mon 09 Jul 2007
keep going ^_^

brina- Mon 09 Jul 2007
I loved this story please make more chapters.

thanks and please respond

demonlordlover- Mon 09 Jul 2007
I really enjoyed this chapter. She came to realize that Sesshoumaru hadn't really meant her harm.

What will happen next, however. Hmmm...what duties will she be responsible for, especially considering how the others don't care for her?

Mie- Mon 09 Jul 2007
Hi Monty
I've just read your story 'I don't want a mate', and I must congratulate you. Well done woman, bravo. You really understand how to create a story. You have it all figured out, every little detail and it all makes sense, how wonderful (and unfortunately rare). It’s not like other stories I’ve read (not on this HP though) where it seems the author only seems to focus on the erotic part of the story. You, on the other hand, make the characters come to life. They have feelings, emotions and above all there is a reason for their actions.
It’s so easy to write that Sesshuomaru raped Kagome because he wanted to. It’s much more complicated to invent the mating period and the story behind the characters’ actions.
Besides that you clearly have a good English (or a terrific editor) and you also understand the basic grammar in English, which definitely makes it much more pleasurable to read.
I’ve therefore rated you:

Creativity/Originality: 10
Style/Flow/Organization: 10
Characterizations: 10
Spelling/Grammar: 9
Overall: 10

Please keep up the great work, and it you ever feel like quitting the story, remember me and all your other readers who waits excitedly for the next update. You are, like most authors, bringing more joy than you imagine.

Love
Mie

elvira- Mon 09 Jul 2007
wow...umm..very detailed...lol...but one hella good chapter!!

Chaos_Queen77- Mon 09 Jul 2007
Loved it! Please keep up the good work and post another chapter soon.

chaos

Lady Nya- Mon 09 Jul 2007
Great job! I loved it!

naru- Mon 09 Jul 2007
Update!!!! I love this story.!!!!

demon13o- Mon 09 Jul 2007
awesome chapter!

I loved it a lot!

I hope you update soon!

Ja Ne!

Jessica- Mon 09 Jul 2007
Hey! Wow, I really like this fic, it's not like most of the other fics where Sesshoumaru saves after she sees Inuyasha and Kikyo having sex XD! And other fanfics are mostly about how Sesshy is all "cold" towards her and then begins to fall in love with her. In your fic, he's already smitten XD

Excellent work, tell me when you update with a new chappie, k?

-Jess

Any9- Mon 09 Jul 2007
Hehehehe, she forgave him! That was totaly expected.
I can hardly wait to see the next chapter and what others duty does Kagome have (and now I am grining like a loon, lukily I am home alone).

Raceen- Fri 06 Jul 2007
I love it, I really how you play Sesshomaru's character, he's sweet but he still act himself. His relationship with Kagome's mother is so cute! I can't wait for me, keep up the great work.

Lady Care- Tue 26 Jun 2007
Wow great story keep up the good work plese update very soon.

elvira- Mon 25 Jun 2007
poor seehy....poor kagome..having to go though that...hope their pup is ok...more chapters please

Lady Nya- Mon 25 Jun 2007
I liked this chapteer. Don't worry. You are doing fine without your beta, not to say that they aren't helpful mind you cause they are. Update soon.

demon13o- Mon 25 Jun 2007
Aww poor Sesshomaru, lol!

That was a really great chapter! I hope you update real soon okay!

Ja Ne!

whiteinu1- Mon 25 Jun 2007
keep going ^_^

aura- Mon 25 Jun 2007
Loved this line:
'She was too stunned to acknowledge his apology, so she agreed to accompany him and her family without even realizing she had done so.'
Great story so far!
She's being so stubborn, but you can't blame her either.

Any9- Mon 25 Jun 2007
Nice chapter. I can't wait till the next one (it promise something realy interesting "insert here Miroku's eyes").

mistress butcher- Mon 25 Jun 2007
I'm lovin it. Keep up the good work. And I am more then welcome to be your back up beta. Just drop a line and leave an obvious hint in the subject.

RainStorm- Mon 25 Jun 2007
I love everything your doing. I love stories that include them having a family and Sessh going to Kagome's time. Keep up the good work, i'm looking forward to the next chapters! PEACE!!!

Hime jun hi- Sun 24 Jun 2007
OH! OH! can kagome plz forgive himright BEFORE a NICE LONG, LOOOOONG LEMON?!!!! AND can they PLZ be VERY FREQUENT after the NEXT LEMON?!!!! ALSO I vote that BECAUSE of this that the pup comes out to be FULL youkai WITH miko power's!!!! PLZ?!!!!!!!! I'm not afraid to BEG?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Metis- Sun 24 Jun 2007
I almost wish it was. Rape brings out a vindictive streak in me that even castration can't completely diminish. I'm still not happy with his beast, and wish a really big foot would kick it where it counts.

Black_Rose- Sun 24 Jun 2007
I can't wait to read more of this story...it's so well written...please don't make me wait too long...lol!

Megan Consoer- Fri 08 Jun 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

MorningStar- Thu 31 May 2007
aww... Sesshy is so cute when he explains things!
i love this story. please update soon.

robnik- Mon 28 May 2007
This is a very refreshing fic. I really like where it is going. Sess is finally out of his element, and has emotions. Super job!

sesshy's_boo- Sun 27 May 2007
NICE I CAN'T WAIT 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER 2 COME...PLEASE MAKE IT FAST.

anonnie mouse- Sun 27 May 2007
I'm glad you like my ideas....definately feel free to use them!!!
but after I first read that you liked them I thought....."WHAT THE HELL DID I SUGGEST!?!?!?" I honestly couldn't remember!!!!*lmao*

SO Will kag borrow her mom's car and she and sess go baby shopping....ya know for diapers, bottles, maybe a handcranked breast pump and bottles, blankies, layettes........
.......will sess want to learn how to drive a car I wonder....only time will tell I guess!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!

demon13o- Sun 27 May 2007
wow nice chapter! so they will go into the past then find them in 500 years nice! okay I'm loving this story more and more, quickly update so I won't die waiting for the next chapter!!

Ja Ne!!

Lil_lo- Sun 27 May 2007
I hope you will be able to write more for this story. You were very adapt at handling the rape situation, and while Inu Yasha is a fantasy setting, others can learn from your example of consequences. I hope to read fluffy moments, but Kagome's title will probably come to play. Will other women try to fight her? Inu Tashio may have left something to help, but this is your story. Thank you

katie- Sun 27 May 2007
wow i like it please keep going

Any9- Sun 27 May 2007
Hehehe, the things are looking better and better for Sesshoumaru.
Thank you for your notice and as expected the chapter was realy good. Please continue, and update as soon as you can.

loveyaa1210- Sat 26 May 2007
I really enjoy ur story and how it is progressing. I like that you put in Kagome's struggles to not forgive and she is slowly losing them. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. I know that it will be as great as the other ones. I can't wait see or read how Kagome reacts during her pregnacy and if she fights those feelings. so til next time. (*smiles*)

Metis- Sat 26 May 2007
Nice comment about the difference of human lifetimes in different ages. However, how can she ever be truly comfortable around his beast? Personally, I'd hate it's guts. She has to accept all of him. Something that few indeed would be capable of doing.

grace- Sat 26 May 2007
its so cute!!!!

Katherine- Sat 26 May 2007
Sweet story I cant wait till you update it

eternally_yours- Sat 26 May 2007
WOW.

i read heaps of 'mating season' type stories.

but yours is truly amazing

i love it!

im looking forward to the next one =]


whiteinu1- Sat 26 May 2007
keep updating ^_^

demon13o- Mon 21 May 2007
awesome fic i really liked it! I hope to read more soon so please update more!

Ja Ne!!

RainStorm- Mon 21 May 2007
I'm eagerly waiting for you to post a new chapter OR TWO (hint hint). But please take you're time, I like the way the story is going so far.

Lady Kiarara- Sun 20 May 2007
please keep me updated. this is really good. u already have my email address. :)

Mystic Miko- Sun 20 May 2007
It's good, can't wait for more, you have a real talent for writing. Please update soon!

Miko53- Sat 19 May 2007
Love it. Keep it comming!!!!
I love when Kagome is strong and gives Sessh such a delightful run for his ego.

Koishii_Beloved- Sat 19 May 2007
Neat! I liked this chapter as much as the first! ^_^

Thanks for reviewing for my fic too! I really appreciated it!

-River

chicke- Sat 19 May 2007
chap 2 was great! keep up the good work!

anonnie mouse- Sat 19 May 2007
hey....her revenge.....MAKEOVER FOR FLUFFY!!!
think about it...

anonnie mouse- Sat 19 May 2007
now SHE's gonna be pissed!!

she has her own doggy now....I can just see her telling her mom "remember how we always wanted a dog?"

so does that mean he's gonna go to the ob doc with her......

what about little rin.....will jaken watch her and not get her kidnapped.

I wonder if Souta will idolized fluffy more than he did inu....
kag'll be mad if that's the case.

hey.....she should go baby-shopping at the mall and conviantly lose track of fluffy.

sesshous_girl- Sat 19 May 2007
Poor kagome half of her wants to forgive him the other half wants to hate him a little longer. Can't wait for more chapters. I love the story and i hope you continue writing.

Any9- Sat 19 May 2007
Awww! This is so cute and nice. The way he care for her.
I love your story and if you have an notice list please put me on it. I want to read your update as soon as they are on.
Thank you and please update as soon as you can

white inu- Sat 19 May 2007
keep updating ^_^

Metis- Sat 19 May 2007
Logical. Don't care. Get lost dog-breath. Hope it's not a hanyou somehow. They're dirty, insecure, unstable, and weak. And youkai ears are cuter.

Anime Angeline- Thu 17 May 2007
hey great story. i really like it. can't wait for the next update. it is quite interesting. XD

Nydanna- Wed 16 May 2007
Oooooo! I love this story already!!! Can't wait to read more! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Lady Kiarara- Wed 16 May 2007
hey this is really good. do you think you can tell me when you update.

al- Wed 16 May 2007
i'm hooked.
i'll wait for more to come.
good luck.

Kami's_Twilight_Angel- Wed 16 May 2007
awww this is so koo, luv the fact that kags has a good im-not-some-delicate-flower kind of head on her shoulders, make sessho work for her complaince! lol update soon plz

anonnie mouse- Wed 16 May 2007
woah....is he pissed off or what!!!!

SO do you think kags will try to close the well....or maybe find books about inu-hanyou pregnancy...or find a demon pregnancy center in her time.....

will sess be able to go to her time to find her.....I wonder what he'd think of her time.

AWWW HE REALLY CARES ABOUT HER!!!!!!!!
THAT"S SWEET!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

grace- Wed 16 May 2007
oooo...have you got a mailing list? This is really good! I love it and will be very upset if you don't update soon!! Thanks for writing this, you've made it perfectly believeible.

;)

Metis- Wed 16 May 2007
And I'm glad she's not being forgiving. I hate it when she does that for the most horrible things.

Metis- Wed 16 May 2007
Ditch him. This is the only time I would even condone abortion. Seal the well and don't look back. (I know I'm talking to the air, but it's nice to get it off my chest)

Lady mikiri- Wed 16 May 2007
Oh my god i loved this you have got to update soon! i loved the shifting of the point of views

SesshomaruCrazy- Wed 16 May 2007
Nice chapter... I like the story so far.. It is interesting... Can't wait for Sesshomaru too see what Kagome is going to do next...
Hurry with next chapter plz...
Take Care
Mari

sesshous_girl- Wed 16 May 2007
Wow this was good plz add more chapters

Chicke- Wed 16 May 2007
GREAT START!! Hope you update soon!

Tori- Wed 16 May 2007
I like how this is going, ya know you could send her back to the future and there could be Sessy there or you can have the sessy in the past come and get her. But ya know there was something missing in the fic, I really don't know what it is, however this story rocks, keep it up.

Sara- Wed 16 May 2007
I like this fic, please continue. I think the spice and resistance you have portrayed Kagome with is very refreshing. A lot of the fics I read have Kagome melting at first sight, ugh! Keep up the good work!

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