wow that was very interesting. It has a real good flow to it. I really can't wait for the next chapter. If I were you I wouldn't make her dream be the one of her book. Mainly cause thats what people expect...but thats just me casue I am totally random at all times lol.
Chelsea
Violetcarson- Sat 05 May 2007
| This looks really interesting!! I assume that her dream will be to live the life that the Princess Kagome led, correct? If not, I'm sure it will still be interesting!
| Wow this is a really neat story!!^_^ Please update as soon as possible! I'm dying to see what happens next!
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