Hey there EternalRose21,
If you're looking for a dependable beta reader, I would be glad to do it for you. I need to practice more on my grammar anyway for English AP next year. So if you would like, just e-mail me when you need anything to be checked. Peace.

Krys

If you need a temp beta I could be of help.

I would help you with your fic but of course I'd need the next chapter to know what directiopn to possibly take....

Actually your spelling was not that bad. And in your story you could go into what she does to say she's sorry, what Sesshomaru does around Kagome seeing as she is supposedly his mate to be, go into more on Inu-Yasha and Kikyou. At this point you can do a lot. If you wanted to you could bring in Sango and Miroku, have kagome get a major make-over. You can also still talk about her job. There is a lot you can do. When I'm writing a story and i get stuck i go back and read through it. Some times it helps me get some new ideas. Well good luck. Can't wait to see more chapters I know they'll be very interesting. BTW you can even bring in koga and/or Naraku.

Actually your spelling was not that bad. And in your story you could go into what she does to say she's sorry, what Sesshomaru does around Kagome seeing as she is supposedly his mate to be, go into more on Inu-Yasha and Kikyou. At this point you can do a lot. If you wanted to you could bring in Sango and Miroku, have kagome get a major make-over. You can also still talk about her job. There is a lot you can do. When I'm writing a story and i get stuck i go back and read through it. Some times it helps me get some new ideas. Well good luck. Can't wait to see more chapters I know they'll be very interesting. BTW you can even bring in koga and/or Naraku.

not really a review just wanted to say that you can feel free to send things to me im great with english so i can check things if your beta doenst reply

Actually your spelling was not that bad. And in your story you could go into what she does to say she's sorry, what Sesshomaru does around Kagome seeing as she is supposedly his mate to be, go into more on Inu-Yasha and Kikyou. At this point you can do a lot. If you wanted to you could bring in Sango and Miroku, have kagome get a major make-over. You can also still talk about her job. There is a lot you can do. When I'm writing a story and i get stuck i go back and read through it. Some times it helps me get some new ideas. Well good luck. Can't wait to see more chapters I know they'll be very interesting. BTW you can even bring in koga and/or Naraku.

Actually your spelling was not that bad. And in your story you could go into what she does to say she's sorry, what Sesshomaru does around Kagome seeing as she is supposedly his mate to be, go into more on Inu-Yasha and Kikyou. At this point you can do a lot. If you wanted to you could bring in Sango and Miroku, have kagome get a major make-over. You can also still talk about her job. There is a lot you can do. When I'm writing a story and i get stuck i go back and read through it. Some times it helps me get some new ideas. Well good luck. Can't wait to see more chapters I know they'll be very interesting. BTW you can even bring in koga and/or Naraku.

Actually your spelling was not that bad. And in your story you could go into what she does to say she's sorry, what Sesshomaru does around Kagome seeing as she is supposedly his mate to be, go into more on Inu-Yasha and Kikyou. At this point you can do a lot. If you wanted to you could bring in Sango and Miroku, have kagome get a major make-over. You can also still talk about her job. There is a lot you can do. When I'm writing a story and i get stuck i go back and read through it. Some times it helps me get some new ideas. Well good luck. Can't wait to see more chapters I know they'll be very interesting. BTW you can even bring in koga and/or Naraku.

Actually your spelling was not that bad. And in your story you could go into what she does to say she's sorry, what Sesshomaru does around Kagome seeing as she is supposedly his mate to be, go into more on Inu-Yasha and Kikyou. At this point you can do a lot. If you wanted to you could bring in Sango and Miroku, have kagome get a major make-over. You can also still talk about her job. There is a lot you can do. When I'm writing a story and i get stuck i go back and read through it. Some times it helps me get some new ideas. Well good luck. Can't wait to see more chapters I know they'll be very interesting. BTW you can even bring in koga and/or Naraku.

Your grammer isn't that good, and the story needs alot of work, but it could go somewhere good.
Nice job.

very interesting, cant wait for more chapters...kick ass kagome!! ^^

Very nice. Update soon.

Two words...LOVED IT!!!!!!!

OMG!!
i love it
lol
i can't wait till you update.
please update soon!!

WOW!!! Nice story. I like this. Can you update, please?????????? thx.

What the hell??? I thought this was a Sess/Kag fic?!?!?! Your making Sesshomaru like Kikyo?!?!?! I mean its not a bad fic its just that mistake that made me go what the hell?!?! Yeah...whatever update soon.

Okay, I'm hooked. What's next? Please update soon 'cause I can't wait to find out.