Reviews for Masquerade by Sada

kiba- Fri 16 May 2008
you made me cry :(

gradualwisd0m- Fri 25 Apr 2008
Oh my goodness. This is probably one of the best fics I have read in a long while. It's intelligent, witty, and has a well thought out plot. I was nearly in tears at the end (tryin to be a tough 'ol grad.)

I will most DEFINITELY be recommending this fic to others. Wow!

Aureza- Fri 21 Mar 2008
You are so not good for me! First it was tears of lost then tears of joy and then just tears! I kind of avoid stories like these... they are not really good for me, but very good job on everything! I really didn't see that coming and... if ever... could you make a sequel? Please? It really hurts right now... especially that you've left it at that... though it's a happy ending. How about sort of an epilogue? I know this fic is past done but.. oh nevermind, it was great and I'll leave it where it is, there's a lot of fics out there!

Brainshake- Fri 22 Feb 2008
Woah, I laughed so hard while reading most chapters, only to almost start crying all of a sudden. It feels like there's a chapter missing with the big battle...
There's one thing I'd like to point out about the grammatic. The grammatical tense changes in the middle of the story. Is this intentional?
Besides that I have nothing to complain about. Except the heavy, sudden and unexpected angst that totally brought me to my knees. But I supposed that was very well written by you, seeing as it almost brought tears to my eyes. I just didn't think it really fit in with the rest of the humor in this story.
Still, it touched me deeply, and I've had a good laugh many many times. :)

Arcana Mortalitas- Fri 01 Feb 2008
WOW!!! You are my new favourite author!!!!! I had to read the last chapter twice!!! They are soooooo cute!!!!

thehotty- Mon 21 Jan 2008
Ok, so here's the deal. You are required to create a sequil. You have no option in the matter. If you refuse to do so, I will hunt you down and take everything that has anything to do with Inu Yasha away from you, including your memory, and use it for the good of the readers. Yes, I love your writing that much. So get to work, right now! PLEASE! Anyway, Peace out.
~TH~

Tainted Sins- Sun 20 Jan 2008
Words can not BEGIN to show how much I loved this fic. It was hilarious and heart-wrenching and- let's face it people, I'm probably just bipolar.
Loved it, also can't wait for next update for Slip of the Tongue.
-Sniggers- Ten...

Sango- Sun 20 Jan 2008
I love this story so much.

I laughed in most of the chapters, characterization was wonderuflly done, emotive language - 10 out of 10, couldn't stop reading until the end, and i nearly cried when Sesshomaru died!

This fic is one of the best. :)

kelsey- Wed 05 Sep 2007
that seriously was one of the funniest stories i have ever read in my life. i seriously am cring from all the laughter. please keep going. Holy freaking god i can't stop. >,

Oreostar90- Sat 18 Aug 2007
Awesome! I loved it!!! Thank you so much, I laughed so hard and almost cried....almost I swear! I like the idea of sesshy dying and reincarnating, few do that and most change kags to a demoness. Bravo!

F.L. Secret- Fri 20 Jul 2007
I remember beginning to read this story about a year ago, and then forgetting about it because you had not yet finished it... Now I finished reading it, and I can wholeheartedly say that this is one of the best fanfics I have EVER READ.

I love it, lots. :] From start to finish in one night... 3

Krys- Mon 09 Jul 2007
Well, I'm done. lol.
I have to say, I was depressed when he died...but it was an unconventional and completely unique ending, and I like that.

You write WONDERFULLY. Very few people have the skill you do, especially with humor. You're amazing, I can't tell you how many times I just cracked up, out loud. I'm sure you know how that it is to actually laugh yourself breathless when reading. Maybe a grin, but laughing yourself senseless...
I've said it like every review, but I truly loved this. You're most definitely gifted. I'm SO favoriting this. And reccing it.
Thank you for writing this!

-Krys

Krys- Mon 09 Jul 2007
Ok. I'm STILL laughing my ass of, for real. The drunk chapter is PRICELESS.
Holy crap, I think I'm gonna read it again.

I'm seriously in love with your story. And I love how Seshoumaru says 'roll with it'.
I love you!!! *glomps*
lol.

Krys- Mon 09 Jul 2007
Ok.
I'm going to live for many, many years (from laughing).
I really hope you continue writing to entertain me all those years.
I.
LOVE.
THIS.

-Krys

Krys- Sun 08 Jul 2007
Ok.
I was planning on reviewing once I'd finished the story, but I had to send one now. This story is HILARIOUS. It's very rare to find a fanfic so full of humor that isn't forced. It just comes so natural and so often - I really, really love this story already and I'm not that far in. I can already tell I'm going to keep it as a favorite, and I'm going to rec it on my ff.net profile, too. It's so original and unique - it's freaking brilliant, and I just want to thank you for writing this.

I've laughed enough to add another 5 years to my life. You'll probably be getting more reviews from me as I read on...

-Krys

Cosmos Writer- Sat 23 Jun 2007
That was awsome! I want to hear about Kagome being drunk again! Just about the funniest thing I have ever read, keep it up, your work really made me laugh until I cried, really not ever joking. "That is it! I swear off sake forever!" Me too Kags, me too.

Snow Ahriman- Wed 23 May 2007
This fic was just what I needed for my last week of high school. This was my stress relief and I've never laughed so much at a romantic fic before. I'm hoping that you have another one but I haven't looked yet. Thank you for writing something so well that made me laugh and want to cry.

Asmodeus- Tue 22 May 2007
Despite my hiatas away from fanfiction....you have effectively drawn me back in *drool.. you story has put me to tears, made me *drool, and i've found myself covering my mouth so that my mother doesnt hear my laughter at 3 in the morning *shakes head.

InuWhisperer- Thu 10 May 2007
This was an excellent story. It made me laugh and brought tears to my eyes. Very well done.

Darkness- Fri 04 May 2007
I LOVE YOU i havent been able to get on the net in so long but u brought my absolute fav story back yes i love you don't you ever take Masquerade away again please

Raye:SesshyFan- Wed 02 May 2007
First of all I aboslutely, positively, absolutely-wait, I bet you know what I'm going to say, yes?

Ah, too bad.

I ENJOYED this fiction so much! I wonder why it wasn't even nominated for the awards. Seriously. It had me laughing from beginning to end. I almost choked on my taquito-yes, a chicken taquito while doing so. That never happens-seriously-it never does since I have complete control with my.....mouth?

Now I'm just being weird.....but, besides that, this is now one of my favorite fanfics, the top of humor ones I have read to be more exact. I cannot wait [patiently] for another story as humorous as this one, or more than this, in the future :P

~Raye:SesshyFan

Chelsea- Sun 29 Apr 2007
-is speachless-............ LOVESSSS IT X3 SOOOOOOO Sesshy and Kag!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

angel87- Sat 28 Apr 2007
that was absolutely beautiul!!!!!!!!

please feel free to write as much as you want. I am eternally hooked!!!!

angel87- Sat 28 Apr 2007
that was absolutely beautiul!!!!!!!!

please feel free to write as much as you want. I am eternally hooked!!!!

MorningStar- Wed 25 Apr 2007
omg...*hearts*
i absolutely love how you brought him back!!! *tears* if i had a chocolate covered sesshomaru you would definitely be allowed to sample some. hmmm... chocosessho.... mmmmm.
anyway, i loved this story, thank you so much for sharing it with us.

Lady Ashira Taisho- Wed 25 Apr 2007
I LOVED IT I started crying when he died at the end but then you brought him back so I was really happy.

Something-or-other- Tue 24 Apr 2007
Oops, I forgot to say something in my last reveiw. ME BE HAPPY YOU BE BACK!!! Very happy. Very, VERY happy. I mean...happy to the point of nearly selling away my secret Gerald Butler poster. And if you knew me, you know that I would NEVER do that in a million years. I'm too in love with my man. But, seeing your story back and running, I was willing to sell it to the highest bidder.

Ah yes. You scream for ice scream, I scream for ice cream, we all scream for ice cream, but we all scream ourselves hoarse for Sesshou-induced orgazeems. I know. I'm a hentai. :D

Silent Nox- Tue 24 Apr 2007
Does Souta has a phobia of sex or something? XD He's practically paranoid with the two reunited lovebirds and screaming his head off^^ I can so totally imagine him running across the couryard screaming his head off saying
"MOM, JI-CHAN! THE BIRDS AND THE BEES ARE ATTACKING THE SHRINE!!!"

So sad that he had to interrupt them, I'm sure he would have been even more scarred had he caught them further along the the act ^_~ But I guess no smut is a good trade for the innocence of a little boy~

NOT!

SS

PS. Lovely finish, and I REALLY look foward to the next chapter of Slip of the Tongue.

Leunra- Mon 23 Apr 2007
AHH!! The best EVER!!! It made me smile...truly smile...even inside a sigh-ish kinda smile where you're happy and content and exuding with loveliness.
Thank you for giving us a good ending. I cried my eyes out with the last two chapter and this made up for it.

lilmoe30- Mon 23 Apr 2007
Wow are my words, Wow. Wow.
That was one of the most funniest and heartfelt stories I have ever read on this site. Thank You. Thank You so much for writing it. You are truly gifted!!!

LynLin- Mon 23 Apr 2007
AH! I finally found this fic again after so many long months without it!

One day, a girl was on her computer, bored out of her mind. Then she remembered that she had been in the middle of reading a wonderfully entertaining Sesshoumaru and Kagome fic a while ago. She wondered how the hell she could have forgotten. So, she searched high and low for it, but sadly, it was in vain. The fic was missing.

She remembered the author's pen name started with an S, so she went searching there. There was nothing even vaguely familiar. She was appalled and saddened.

Months later, she went on the computer again, remembering the missing fic. She looked through the recommended fics, but got sick of seeing bad fics being recommended. She then tried looking for the authors again, and SUDDENLY, SHE RECOGNIZED SADA. WTHECK, she though.

And then she re-read the entire story of Masquerade with glee. The end.

And that's what happened to me. My gosh, I was so happy when I found this again. I was just wondering where your other fic went? I remember it had something to do with Kagome being reincarnated as a boy? LOL I wanted to know where that went. And I was sure that Masqurade had tons more reviews and votes than it does now. What happened? And why the heck couldn't I find it for so long?!?!

Sorry for all the questions. Anyway. I'm happy, albeit a little confused about the ending. Why Sesshoumaru remembers everything, what happened in the last fight, what happened to Masao and Leiko, etc etc.

Long review. Hmm. GOOD JOB.

-Lyn

Sirinya- Mon 23 Apr 2007
I love it! :D
But 96,000 yen ... is WAY WAY TOO MUCH ! no one walks around with $960~ bucks >_. that crazy for a book >_>;

karla- Sun 22 Apr 2007
oh! brava! that was amazing! i was so almost in tears when the poor guy died! i'm glad you brought him back though as a human so they could have some babies and sesshoumaru won't have to watche her grow old while he stays eternally youthful! perfect! i most definately loved it! i somehow wish you would write a sequel, but i don't think it would do. this story just had an amazing ending that wrapped everything up and left no open ends! haha. well keep up the awesome work! *runs off to check for other wonderful stories by the talented sada*

Kanela- Sun 22 Apr 2007
I LOVE YOU!!! Very very much! I dooo!
And I missed your story! You know I did...and I followed *cof*stalked*cof* you and your advances...
I'm almost crying (not really, I did so last chapter, when he died) because this is the end! The End of Masquerade!! Cannot believe it...I enjoyed this fic so much, laughed so much, cried so much (due to my laughing)...And made me wonder so much! (Like when would you update, why was it deleted, when would you come back, how were you gong to kill him -because I knew you were killing him-, etc..)
I sincerely, undoubtely, adoringly love you.
^_________^

Kanz.

Oh! And you mentioned me! *giggles*

Kjinuyasha- Sun 22 Apr 2007
Awww. That was so sweet. Why must you make tears well up in my eyes????

And I get the title... it matches with the little story at the end. This is the type of story I'd wish to never end... but an excellent ending it was... It was an ending... right? (LOL)
Thank you for an excellent read...

Luv ya,
-Kjinuyasha

Kai- Sun 22 Apr 2007
I cried. Bawled even! Mostly at the time when Sesshoumaru died. I have to say that was the most touching scene I've read in quite a while. And then when they found each other I started to cry again! Even my nose began to bleed, but my nose has its issues, ANYWAYS. It is a beautiful story and I'm glad I took time out of my day to read the whole thing. It is beautifully executed. Thank you for this story. ^_^ 3

ChaosWingDragon- Sat 21 Apr 2007
The end? THE END? Noooooo!*falls to knees in agony.* This can’t be true! First it was first and then updated and then gone and now back and updated and now the end? Its…its…@_@*faints dead away and wakes up 5 minutes later* fine! I’ll except that this is the end only if you put out a new story. And soon…or now. Now would work for me XD. That way I won’t have to suffer from any more Sada deprivation. Deal? I’ll even throw in a chocolate fountain and a naked Sesshomaru as incentives. I’ll be watching you! In a non-freaky definitely not a stalker way. Lol, Chow^^!
~Chaos

Violetcarson- Sat 21 Apr 2007
OMG!!! That was like, one of the best endings I've ever read! How seet was that? OMGOMGOMG!!! I absolutely loved that!!! You HAVE to write another story now! Now!!

Rain- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Wow! I love this fic, seriously LOVE this fic. It had me laughing so hard that I now have a stitch in my side... and it hurts a little. Oh well.

They're characterization was just so believable, and Kagome's thoughts amuse me to no end.

They last couple of chapters seemed kinda rushed, and you skipped the fight scene, so I kinda didn't like that, and I didn't really like the whole Sesshomaru dieing and then coming back human. It did make alot of sense and I was glad that you didn't take away is award winning personality though.

But ya, Overall it was a really great fanfic, and I am definitely going to put this in the wordpad of good stories to read when bored... Hope to see more from ya.

itachiiyoubastard- Sat 21 Apr 2007
HELLZ YEAH!! HOMGHOMGHOMGHOMGHOMG..! I'm freeking happy that you finished your excellent story, but I'm sad too cuz it's done! *tear* But, your still going to write cuz you are the shizzle! *dances around crazily*

Brittney- Sat 21 Apr 2007
That made me cry. I've only read 2 other stories that have made me cry. I loved it. You did a great job writing it and I'm still trying to calm myself down. You're a great author.

P.S. i am not a conceited person. My friend made my email account so she chose that address. I just don't want you to think badly of me & not know me so i decided to leave this for you.

Something-or-other- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Well, well, well. Damn good piece of work, I would say. And my opinion means EVERYTHING. ;) This was awesomely delicious. Mmm. And just thinking of Sesshoumaru's Mr. Happy Place made me think...NC-17 thoughts. I think your writing is bad for my health.... Ah, ya gotta die some time, anyways. I think I've said it before, but I'll say it again. This is AWESOMELY ADDICTING, FANTASTICALLY FUN, HILARIOUSLY HAPPY, and a lot more I cannot think of. It was a hilarious, perfect, awesome, fantastic, funny, gut-bursting, side aching, completely well-written, original, never before done, awe-inspiring, great story. And did I mention damn funny? 'Cause it was. Mm, I'm so glad you finished it. For a reward you can have a nakie Sesshoumaru dipped in milk chocolate for your birthday...or now. Either way.

Tana-san- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Wow, I read this so long ago and thought it was left undone. Alot of writers lose their will to finish and I'm so glad you re-vamped and finished it. I think it was wonderfully done. I totally loved Masao. I squeed when Sess and Kagome finally got it together and did the deed and I cried when he died. "You promised", she said. And she climbed into his lap holding and touching him until he was no more. Shoot...I'm tearing up again...*wipes tears and blows nose* such an emotionally heartbreaking scene. Then she just happens to find this book and my heart skipped a beat and I dared to hope and you fulfilled those hopes by giving him "unfinished business". He knew her!!! Yay!!! And to make the icing on the cake and finish it with great humor, Souta's intrusion and comments were so cute and just like a little brother. Bravo, Sada. I thank you and your the fans that got you inspired to finish. I've been looking at some of your other works since finishing this and you are quite funny and a good writer. "Slip of the Tongue" had me in stitches. Kagome should have kept her mouth shut and then maybe her neighbor would have not kissed her like he did. Sesshoumaru seeing it was so funny but her remarks to him as he was trying to discuss the situation with her were the best. I do hope you intend to write more as your talent is a gift to share and I am one to encourage each writer with this kind of talent to continue as there are people like me who live off of your imagination and take us to places we can never go. Take care and until the next time....JEN

royalbk- Sat 21 Apr 2007
*grins* Oh yes...I am definitely satisfied with this ending. I so love you right now!

^_^ Kagome and Sesshoumaru are back together *insert squee here* and this story had the perfect finale. Two people trying to have a go at it like animals while the little brother is watching *snickers*

hidden- Sat 21 Apr 2007
yay! a happy ending! that was an awesome story whoooo!

Jessica- Sat 21 Apr 2007
I really really really really really like that story.... i was so sad when sesshomaru died.... i thought it was over right then and the chapter before the last so i was bummed out lol.... wel great story one of the best i've read... (and i've read alot too)

Mir- Sat 21 Apr 2007
It's finished! This story has been one of my faveourites, and I'm so glad that it's finished. It made me cry and it made be laugh. I'm very glad you gave it a happy ending. All in all, congratulations on such a well-written story. I look forward to seeing my stories from you!
Mir

hidden- Tue 10 Apr 2007
wh -wh -What?! He's dead?! And you didn't present the last chapter to me so i could hopefully feel happier? please!! ur story's wonderful and
i need a fluffy-pick-me-up

Tiegrsi- Tue 10 Apr 2007
Aweful. That's how I feel right now. So I guess I should congratulate you on your writing, because there has only ever been one other fanfic that made me cry like that. The story is very good, but I want an ending! I hope you post it soon. Even if it isn't all gum drops and sugar coated...I still want to know what happens. *goes off to sulk* *comes back* Is Kagome PREGNANT?! Please? You did allude to how Sess was mad that his father at least had INuyasha to continue on afterwards...I hope Kags has a baby Sesshy! *Hopes*

Kanela- Tue 10 Apr 2007
YOU RE-POSTED IT!!!!
I missed seeing this title so much, you know I did....And you killed Sesshoumaru! How- why- what?...Naa..I already knew..
I'm so glad this story is up again, I really missed it, as I'm sure many other readers did.
I'll be expecting next chapter on the brink on my seat. *nods*
I send you a huge sloppy kiss ^^ (do not try to wipe it!! I'm watching you!!)

-Kanz

jade- Mon 09 Apr 2007
i have a question, after the chapter Interlude, the story line jumps to sess dying and misses the whole fight. Can't wait til the next chapter

WiccanMethuselah- Mon 09 Apr 2007
Ok, was that A/N in the "oops" chapter a hint or something? If you will recall, two chapters prior, you did beseech your audience to stay with you because it would all work out ... I sure hope that meant that there would be some semblance of a happier ending ... ??? If your A/N was a hint, saying one more chapter that's "epic" but "it's not," kinda makes me feel a little less hopeful, y'know?

Let me explain myself, though. After having a perfectly miserable Easter holiday, I stayed up all night reading this story. I cried my eyes out for a good 20 minutes at the end, but I DID manage to forget some of my own problems for a while. In addition, I had the advantage of releasing those endorphins through crying over your story that I probably wouldn't have without reading it.

BUT ... big BUT ... I am still DESPERATELY hoping that there is some way to pull something 'warm and fuzzy' and, overall, satisfying out of such a tragic circumstance. Hopefully, without the well-worn pregnancy thing - especially since he said it couldn't happen anyway. Eh, I'll sit back and wait - as patiently as possible - for the promised next chapter. In the meantime, THANK YOU for a story that made me laugh a lot more than it made me cry ... and, in the process, made me forget about "real" life for a while.
;)
~~Wiccan~~

phxazkyote- Mon 09 Apr 2007
::Blink blink:: you killed him?! Thats..thats.. BLASPEMY! ::Stomps like a 2 year old:: BRING HIM BACK!

GleefulSorrow- Mon 09 Apr 2007
I cannot even began to describe how much I love this story. It's got it all. Humor, adventure, and whoo, the angsty romance! Can't wait to see the last chapter. Update soon :) :) :)

Leunra- Mon 09 Apr 2007
HE'S DEAD!!! Aww Leunra sad...I'm crying...I'm acually crying while I'm typing this review do ya read this!?!?!
That was soo good I missed this fic! Why did he die?!?!!
Very few fanfictions made me cry and this is my friend, I'm telling you now is te second to make me cry. The first was "Flowers on the Moon" if you read that you already know why...if not read and find out.
I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter, until then.

fake name?- Mon 09 Apr 2007
I know the story is amazing considering its one of the few that actually interests me enough to finish. I loved everything up to the point where he died, but then again I'm a sucker for happier endings. So all I honestly have to say is: amazing story, charming dialogue, and wrap it up as soon as you can. ( and maybe throw in a happier ending for me )

fake name?- Mon 09 Apr 2007
I know the story is amazing considering its one of the few that actually interests me enough to finish. I loved everything up to the point where he died, but then again I'm a sucker for happier endings. So all I honestly have to say is, amazing story, charming dialogue, and wrap it up as soon as you can. ( and maybe through in a happier ending for me )

hasu86- Mon 09 Apr 2007
i read through your story all day and i must say, it was fucking wonderful. i really do love your writing, it's nice and flowy, with great dialogue and funny funny scenes, mmhmm, i'm quite speechless right now. you've done quite well. i'm glad you continued this though and i can't wait to read the last parts!
-hasu86

oh Please- Sun 08 Apr 2007
WOW! (big tears rolling down my face) WOW!
Sess is wonderful in your story. And the humor is sneaky. (shagged like a rabbit) too funny.
But that death scene was heart wrenching. I sure didn't see that coming. Just like real life. And as it turned out, all the times she said SHE could die tomorrow, and it was him instead. But, at least he had no regrets about loving her.
Poor Kagome. :`(
Keep up the good work and I hope you update that last chapter soon!

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Wow...just one more chapter and it's over. I'm almost afraid that Kagome will not meet Sesshoumaru (one impossible way or the other) and that the story will end with her continuing the rest of her life with another man.

*sulks* Realistic stories tend to go that way...

Oh well. I'll patiently wait here for the epilogue.

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*is about to cry* Now, this is sad. I feel for Kagome - poor, little human girl. She was supposed to go first but the fates were cruel.

*wipes tear*

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*sigh* I'm almost depressed now by this idea that Kagome is going to die and Sesshoumaru will just continue living. Forever.

It's really, really...sad.

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
I could die a happy woman right now. *starry eyed* Really, really happy

A love these well written lemons that don't need any vulgar or suggestive words to *sarcastic* make the readfer understand what's going on* \

*rolls eyes* So...reading forward.

P.s: That quote with the 'and again and again...' has just become one of my all time favorite!

flyingteapot- Sun 08 Apr 2007
I am doing the happy dance, complete with the "jiggy", heh...Welcome back!
The newest chapters left me in tears, reading them made me achingly feel so much for Kagome. Sesshoumaru dying was definitely a surprise and strangely, it made me wonder again why your story is named "Masquerade"...Hm, don't know if I made any sense there. Anyways, I'm looking forward to what you have planned for the ending. Last week I nominated "Masquerade" for the Single Spark Annual Awards in several categories and it was accepted but now I don't see it in the final voting list, I don't get it...

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Soooo...no pouncing until the Shikon in purified? None whatsover?

*pouts in a corner* Well, I suppose it will be all the more interesting when it does happen. With all that pent up sexual frustration...

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Smut...soon?

*big puppy eyes* You promise on the fluffy Mokomoko-sama?

*grins* Already I see the signs...and they make me so happy. Hatsuho is here to make Kagome jealous and speed things up a bit.

Laini- Sun 08 Apr 2007
HOLY HELL,ur back lol. And the end? darn *cries* oh well some things do have to end eventually,no matter how much i adore this fic..*sniffles* Anyway,hehe. Lovin the fic,great job chica! Glad to see your back ^_^

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
I can't believe it was a dream...it had sounded so good I was beginning to drool on the keyboard. *shoves disgusting imagery out of her mind and throws a stick so it doesn't return*

After this whole 'confession' I'm quite positive that Kagome will never, ever touch sake again.

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Sesshoumaru and a conscience...*tries to imagine it and fails*

Well, at least he called her name just now. That's definitely an improvement...

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Happy, happy, happy...

*smiles* They finally kissed...and now, let the battles of wills begin. Kagome is stubborn, Sesshoumaru even more. He wanted her, she wants him but won't admit it yet...and Inuyasha will just swing in the story like an idiot to disrupt their sexual tension.

*pats Inuyasha* And make Sesshoumaru jealous! @.@

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
See? This is exactly why I can't stand Inuyasha...sometimes, just at the worst times, he has to play the brave, righteous puppy and save Kagome. Hoping to get back in her favor after doing something wrong. *sighs*

itachiiyoubastard- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*loud hysterical sobs* E-e-e-excell-lent as u-usual.. *sniff* U-update s-s-s-s-soon! *continuation of loud hysterical sobs*

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Oh my! A child out of all things.

Huh. Imagine that coming. I didn't know that Masao and Leiko had acted so...freely during their courting period. Or whatever it was.

Still no hope for SK anytime soon.

...

Damn.

Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*giggle* You know what I hate? Well, since you are curious (I can tell) I shall share my secrets. I hate it when I read (or at least start to read) a fanfiction and think

'Oh Dear God! Have I read this before?'

I have just finished reading the prologue and I just had a deja vu type of thing happening. Was this posted before?

Trust me! I will finish reading this story and review at the end. I was just wondering if this was up before.

Well, onto chapter two! or one? I think the first 'chapter' was a prologue or something.

Toodles!

-Ashley

P.S. Great freaking work so far!

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Ah...I so hope that Sesshoumaru asks for Kagome as payment. The look on her face would be priceless.

The things that would follow would turn me into a grinning fangirl.

P.S: Love the little conversation in the ending AN. *snickers* Sesshoumaru threw Kagome over his shoulder. That makes me happy...even if they are for now only Author Notes

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Ah. Finally some Sesshoumaru and Kagome closeness. Written in that same fashion that always makes me so happy. Ethereal in a way.

Like the quote: Kagome opened her eyes and stared into Sesshoumaru’s, surprised that - for the first time - she was looking down at him. Sesshoumaru stared back at her, expressionless and cold...and hot.

*sighs* You remind me of Remirands in a way. *applauds* Very well done. Inuyasha is not in the story...though I'm not really fond of him.

*smirks* Let's see what he does when he notices the tension between Sesshoumaru and Kagome.


royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Oh, don't worry. I like Kikyou very much. She is one of my favorites after Kagome and Sango...and perhaps Kagura (but neither, except Kagome, with Sesshoumaru *scowls)

I like it when authors don't write Kikyou - dignified, once kind, poised Kikyou - like a whore or something. Excuse the language please. Kikyou is too much of a lady, even if she hates Kagome, to be treated as otherwise.

*smiles* I love the story of Leiko and Masao. Can't wait to read the last, hopefully, part of it. ^_^

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
“Oh no! I can’t have children! You can’t breed a dog and a cat! It’s... it’s against the laws of the universe! It’d be a dat! Or... or a cog!”

*giggles hysterically*

When he was sure she was asleep Sesshoumaru slammed his head back against the tree.

*already rolling on the floor laughing with tears*

*wipes tear away* This chapter was priceless! Sesshoumaru...you poor thing. She's trying to seduce you and you're not even reacting. *snickers evilly* Well...at least it would be good if she did try to seduce you.

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Oooooh...sexual needs. Poor Kagome really has to get laid. Fast. Now. While the readers aren't banging their heads on walls.

Kagome: What do you mean readers? I'm the one who has the problems here!

Me: *glowers* Well neither of us would have problems (I'm not the patient type you know) if you would just pounce Sesshoumaru and...*strangled voice with laughter* molest him. Think about it. It might give him something to remember for years to come.

Kagome: *blushes to her ears*

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
The world probably went boom because Sesshoumaru realized that he might actually want Kagome...as incredible as it may sound.

*grins*

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Ah. Sesshoumaru is jealous! It's a very rewarding sigh...I can't wait for the first kiss. I suspect/hope that the itch burning in his stomach is just because he want to...jump her bones? *grins*

And now to see why Leiko went nuts. Dun dun dun dun...

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*giggles* The whole thing with everyone jumping and growling and glowering at everyone else was the best part of this chapter. *sigh* I think I'm in love!

I want some Sesshoumaru/Kagome interaction soon...more than the usual 'Die girl'/'Unfeeling bastard' kind of interaction. *zooms to next chapter*

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*giggles* Profane is right. I'm surprised that Rin's face hasn't burst into flames by now. Manwhore >.>

Kagome...tsk, tsk, tsk!

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*muffles laughter* I swear...you should've posted this earlier so I could nominated you for Best Humor/Comedy!

This story is truly hilarious. I'll probably sit in front of the computer, reading and remembering how Sesshoumaru killed the damn leaf. *snickers*

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
I don't know where to start. Should I praise you for Kagome speaking her thoughts out loud or for the oh so inspired 'Fate is Naraku in disguise'?

Both I think! *gives you chocolate*

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*giggles* Irony is a bitch...Sesshoumaru's mother indeed.

I'm going to, at the risk of annoying you, mention how much I love your sense of humor. The way you ingrain it in the story, makes the characters come alive. They're more than just the characters from the anime.

*smiles*

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*giggles* The part with the firefly and the one with 'Oh, look. Leg' has me laughing my head off.

Your story is hilarious. Kagome and Masao have this edge to their sense of humor that always compells me read more.

Probably why I love 'Slip of the Tongue' too!

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*giggles*Masao is dead when Sesshoumaru sees him oggling Kagome like that. Hey...if it happens once, it will happen again (besides, he said so too in the ending A/N)

Poor Kagome...she expected to look like a demon, but didn't really anticipate it. *grins* And Masao is a pervert.

I'm glad that none of the gang will be in this story for now. It would make things more complicated for Sesshoumaru (except Sango. I love Sango! -.-')

royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Yay! I love a good dose of witty comments...it's good to see Kagome being a brave young woman even amongst such a colored crowd. *grins*

Oh, I have every intention of reviewing every chapter! Onward horsie!

Mir- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Oh my. I really enjoyed the last two chapters, the emotion that was conveyed-although he did die; it was a very well-written death. And I do hope it gets better because I don't know if my fangirl heart can take it (lol).
Thank you for coming back and posting this story.
Mir

Sidhe- Sun 08 Apr 2007
YOU'RE BACK!!!! I fell in love with this story and was crushed when it was suddenly just gone>....but it's back, and now all is right in my world !!::sits glued to the screen, gleefully awaiting the next chapter::

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