really good stuff! keep it up!

Awww...*sniff sniff* That was so sad :( But very well written :) Maybe you could write some more? Maybe from the Kagome's POV? *I assumed that this was from Sesshoumaru's POV, but, I could be wrong*

Anywayyyyyyy. Great job :) :) :)

that's a really good poem ..

....but i was wondering is it sesshoumaru that is telling this to kagome or is it the other way around???

I don't usually like to read poetry on here, but I must admit, I liked this one.

Good job; lots of emotion in such a simply poem.

Keep up the great work!

-[ashley x3]

aaaawwww i'm loving this poem plz make a story about this it's would be great i shore so plz write
always here ashley_kun ^__^