Very good story.. I enjoyed reading it..
iam glad she stayed at the end..
i wish there was more..Maybe a Sequel to see what happens now..
Well anys great story.. Short but sweet..
Take care
Mari

awesome!! please do update soon ^^

wow that was short. i thought it was going to drag out. oh well. update soon.. we all need a nice long, extremly citric lemon..... lots of fluff and stuff.

update soon!!!

Gothic Lust

kewl update soon i can't wait

I LOVE THIS STORY LINE!!!! Write more, quickly, quickly.... WHAT??!! You have a life outside my reading pleasure... hawell, I can wish that you were slave to my reading needs. Keep up the good work, cause I love to stroll down the paths of your imagination.
Rhonda

Aaaaaw. This is so romantic although you have some grammar errors but they're minor. Update soon.

cool! update soon!