dude forget the beta and write the story I really want to know what happens nexts so please

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

continue plz

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

that is such a good story and I think you should give Kagome a sword or something that wold be cool ^^ and i think you can all so do that she can see the things in her dreams or something am just giving you ideas you don't have to do any thing but I like you story ^^

ooooooo! nice plot but could you make the chapters longer please. o and you didnt put speaking marks at the start when they were speaking

like your story though I would like to make one request. Could you space out the dialogue some times you can't tell who is speaking. Thank you and post soon.

hugs and puppies.

your story has promise but you are in desprate need of a beta.

but good idea!!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?