Music Junkie- Tue 18 Sep 2007
Dude this was so freakin funny. I had a tear slip out during the kitchen scene. Please. I am begging you. You have to write more chapters. This story is so hilarious. Please email me when you up date.

syaorangirl- Fri 14 Sep 2007
Update!!update soon!!

syaorangirl- Fri 14 Sep 2007
Update!!update soon!!

fay jay- Fri 30 Mar 2007
update pleeeease!

Siruka- Fri 29 Dec 2006
I cant do without any longer write more!

anonnie mouse- Tue 05 Dec 2006
*IMPORTANT INFO YOU WILL REALLY WANT TO KNOW!!!!*
Okay I'm telling you this here because on ff. net you don't do anonymous reviews.....

a person on fanfiction . net posted a story down to the last words like this one that I'm reviewing from.....here's the link...... http : / / www . fanfiction . net / s / 3274070 / 1 /
the posters name is "KiraraUnleashed" and the version of the story is called "What A Bet!" at the end it even has "ton" spelt "tonne" like you did {somwhat proof of copy and paste}

I would have thought that it could be coincidence but a few weeks ago she posted something that was like {down to the dialogue} something else I had read by another person...so if in the end I was totally wrong and you have like 3 or more accounts on ff . net sorry. Just thought I should let you know.

Priah- Sun 12 Nov 2006
took a while but I finally read it, I liked it, but I'm still not sure what exactly Sesshomaru bet. did he bet that he would sleep with Kagome or that he would last the week? I'm kinda confused. Still I liked it.

crimsonnyte- Wed 08 Nov 2006
Very fun!

AW555- Mon 06 Nov 2006
I love it! Can't wait for the next update!

Kags21- Sun 05 Nov 2006
Wow I loved it, can't wait for ch 3

Tana-san- Sun 05 Nov 2006
Hiya. Really liked this 2nd chapter. It was little hard on the eyes though because there weren't enough spacing between sentences. I like the dialogue between the chartacters. The bites and jabs are so funny. Knew Miroku wouldn't make either. But whose to say they don't "play with their puppy" behind closed doors? InuYasha will cave just like Miroku,ne? Why the confusion with the brothers being youkai? I know what you said in your A.N., but I must be lame because the physical features are a dead giveaway,let alone the remarks made in the first chapter. Otherwise, I'm good with this chapter. Like I've said before, I like your style and you keep up the momentum throughout.

Fluffy's Cage of Wonders- Sun 05 Nov 2006
That is some funny stuff there! Lol I can only imagine what the bet between Sesshoumaru and Inu-Yasha is... hmm and Kagome's such a horny-toad!! hahaha Can't wait for the update!!

anonnie mouse- Sun 05 Nov 2006
So do people {Kagome} know youkai exist? you said in chap2 [Sesshoumaru sighed heavily, closing his eyes fully while falling back on the soft cushions, pilled on top of Inuyasha’s soft bed.
“What about ‘us’.”
“Do I have to bark it out for you? They have no idea about me being a hanyou! Or the existence of youkai for that matter! For all they know, I was just a chromosome short and had pre-mature white hair!” ]
but in chap 1 [Miroku was about to answer when a rather irate Kagome jumped in. “Will you two stop it!” grumbled Kagome. “Why are we even talking about this?”

“Psh! We understand why you wouldn't want to talk about it since you're still hung up on Mystery Man-one night stand!” laughed Inuyasha. “On a f’cking’ charity bus tour for the local orphanage too!”

“Jerk! The man…er, YOUKAI{!!!!} was kind enough to donate a HUGE amount to the orphanage!” defended Kagome. ]

SO DOES KAGOME KNOW ABOUT YOUKAI OR NOT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kat- Sat 04 Nov 2006
okay if sessho and kags make it to the end of this bet i so hope for a really long lemon to make up for the torture you'll be putting us through in the meantime... can i say wow... great story very fun update soon

kagsesskyo- Sat 04 Nov 2006
That. Was. So AWESOME!!!!!!!!! PLz update soon!!!!

phishbon3s- Sat 04 Nov 2006
Damn it woman!
You can't just give us Sessie in a towel and leave it hanging...... *cough* ... so to speak.... *blushes*.
Pour Kagome, lesser women would have violated him right there. strong girl.
Miroku bops! Now that woulda been a scene to read!!!! Long Live Hentai!!!!!!!

Kags21- Wed 18 Oct 2006
Update!

tori- Wed 18 Oct 2006
Next Chapters please!!!!! It's so good.

Siruka- Tue 17 Oct 2006
Pleas update soon I'm dieing to find out what happens next.

Tana-san- Tue 17 Oct 2006
Hey Girl!!! You've got another good storyline. I know it's supposed to be OOC, but I can't wait to see the fire blazin' when you put Sesshoumaru in a dorm apartment with the Inu gang. Add a sexy Kikyo to the mix and you got alot of great fun. I love your style of writing and the fun and excitement you put in each of your stories. Yes I have read each one and your first one had me laughing so hard my jaw ached. Don't forget to update Dejavu. You have a very unique story there too and I'll wait for each update on your fics patiently because your fics are well worth the wait.

mika-chan- Mon 16 Oct 2006
This is an awsome fic please update soon ! I hope you canwrite great lemons but it seems that your a great writter so keep it up ^_^

Priah- Mon 16 Oct 2006
Okay, this is worth reading just to see who loses the bet first. I love when plans go all wrong *sighs* It just makes life worth living.

Fluffy's Cage of Wonders- Mon 16 Oct 2006
XD Ah! That's gotta suck! Awesome flow you have there! I hope everything turns out alright... Anyway can't wait for the next update soooo do it soon! :D

Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Mon 16 Oct 2006
OMFG!
this story....its pure genius!
its amazing! i love it!
it is so funny!
that is really a unique idea!
OMG!
please update super soon!

Ja!

...Ashley...

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