ooo i love this! This was so awesome! and very unique!

you ARE an evil lil vixen!i mean how could you?!such a gorgeous story, and only a one-shot! *faints*

any chance you will continue this?
say no, i'll faint again but say yes and i'll worship this fic and review every time! am i tempting you?no?oh man. i'm begging then!

make a sequel please!!

YAY!!! I will give U all the time U need just to get a sequel!! Plz do a sequel and I will literly wait a whole month just to read it!!!

please make a squeal please

This was a really good story... I like how you made it seem so real.. I hope that you actually continue this instead of leaving it a One-Shot.. It can really be an interesting story..
Hope to see more...
Mari

O.o THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! You should do a sequeal or continue with this! OYu have really good potential!

you know, you used the word "menstruations" and Im very sure thats not what you meant. Besides that, good job. I really liked the idea of the mental ward. lol kind of sick of me, ne? ;P
read ya soon
Ari

OMG!!! U have to continue or make a sequel!!! I love it that much!! U can't let it end there!!

i think you should make another story like this.

Well I kinda liked it but it's got problems probably the worst of which is a word choice error, menstruations [having your period] instead of ministrations [forget the exact meaning but it's doing something to someone & it can be you doing whatever to yourself].

That was extremely interesting.... The way you left it though... seemed as though you were going to make a continuation.... I would really enjoy it if you made more of thid mastterful creation. LOL am I being a kiss ass? Oh well... w/e works.

Luv ya,
-Kjinuyasha

Loved it!! ^_^

Very good 1st chapter. I really liked it! Keep up the good work.