Reviews for Unexpected by Kiba

Steffi- Thu 10 Jan 2008
I wanted to thank you for telling me about this story and I wanted to tell you that I find this story really well written and the plot is really interesting.
I hope that every other chapter is as thriling as the rest.
I await your new chapter with pleasure.

Mei_Koi- Tue 08 Jan 2008
OMG i love this story... i cant wait till u update... i hope its soon!!! i love how you portray everyone... even miroku, this is a really good story... most of the time i dont like the stories were Kagome is a demon... or is turned into a demon... this story is very well done!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Mei_Koi

birning ice- Sun 06 Jan 2008
I love your story. You are a really good writer. I cant wate for your next up-date. Don't take to lovg please. :)

Tanya131- Sun 06 Jan 2008
oh please oh please write more.... what happeneds next. i really like this story of yours.

MissTeak- Sat 05 Jan 2008
Oh my goodness. I was having a bad day, but this totally made me forget reality for awhile!! A rarely found good read indeed...you had my full attention for every chapter. Till the next update, take care!:)

emmyjenny- Wed 02 Jan 2008
i want to see what happens though... there could be so much more like the obliteration of the seal and the whole mating thing and the youkai following her and her having children and Yutsuko loving Ryouta and Kagome meeting her mother and brother and the whole generations thing... is this over or are you continuing?

Tanya131- Sun 30 Dec 2007
please write more i really want to know what happens next in the story

Ewy- Fri 12 Oct 2007
Uh.....well.....my teachers leting us have free time in class....and well.....I've been reading this story....and I would really like it if like it would be updated....because there's only so many things you can do that aren't against teh contract they made you sign....anyway LOVE THE STORY!!!!

K.M.- Fri 04 May 2007
Hey love it!!! keep it up I like where its going and this whole curse thing is cool too.

Kawaii_Kilala- Tue 24 Apr 2007
It's a very great story, and it looks like you have everything thought out...but i must wonder, is it all really thought out? Considering that its been oh...around 1 month since you last up-dated this story...
And, will she be transforming into her larger, doggy form in this story? I hope so! it would be so sweet! and if they were to have sex in those forms...well thats just an added bonus...;-P
So, wheres that update? and how did your health paper go? you finished it, correct? I hope so anyways! And please, up-date soon! Real soon!

tianai- Wed 28 Mar 2007
i love this fanfiction. u write with grown up words not the kiddy one that some people use. i have read many of ur fanfics and my faves r the crossover one between inuysha and naruto. i love i love it when its about kagome,sesshoumaru and garra. they r so cool. keep up the good work, and please write more long crossover of the there people on a single spark or fanfiction net. thanx

Megan Consoer- Wed 21 Mar 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Kanazawa- Wed 14 Mar 2007
Wonderfully well written story. I can't wait to come back and read the rest!

Bobbie Cook- Wed 14 Mar 2007
Um hi when are you going to update breeding school? Cause like thats my favorite story. Plz update soon...

Ummm thats my sisters email so if you email me please adress the email to bobbie

karla- Wed 14 Mar 2007
ah interesting! please update soon! i really like this story, but the beginning and some parts more recently written had me really confused. i would suggest a beta to read over your work before publishing it, you have amazing talent, but your grammer lacks in some areas. namely commas and run-on sentences... and occasionally there are a few sentences that i have to read again to make sense of.... but im not flaming you if u think i am... just some constructive criticism because i really love this story.. its original and well thought out, so please contine soon!!

Sicilia- Wed 14 Mar 2007
Go Kiba Go Kiba!!!!!!!!!! hehehe I loved the chapter but update soon :)

Sicilia- Wed 14 Mar 2007
Go Kiba Go Kiba!!!!!!!!!! hehehe I loved the chapter but update soon :)

Unseen Watcher- Wed 14 Mar 2007
Oh, and I like how she defends her mate, even if he's not there to be personally attacked. I hate it when she has clashing loyalties. Having her sure of herself and where she belongs is a rare and refreshing occurance.

Unseen Watcher- Wed 14 Mar 2007
YEEEHAAAAA!!! Welcome back! Man, how will I remember all of the parts of the chapter I like? I like the fact that Sess' is getting a clue that he has to bend, and it's natural that he won't change overnight. Yay for Rin! I'm so glad she'll stay around in their lives. I don't think I've ever heard that idea before. Very nice. I'm actually glad that the fight with 'Yasha wasn't prolonged. It gives some hope for him too and her friends taking her side helped. I'm glad she's getting over her human modesty in regards to Sess. I'm also glad that she feels little guilt about putting stubborn, foul mouthed hanyou back a few steps! And HA! Tetsusaiga doesn't work against her! *feels smug* Oh, yeah! The explanation for her past clumsiness was inspired! Can I use it sometime? If I ever write a story with her already being youkai?

judzea- Fri 23 Feb 2007
Just finished reading this story and was surprised that it wasn't bad at all. Nicely done.

Please update soon and please finish the story to completion. It's a good story that needs and ending that is if your time allows it.

Thank you for your efforts in entertaining us non-writers :) *giggles*

clock-winder- Sat 17 Feb 2007
please.....please.....update....i beg you! cries>

clock-winder- Sat 17 Feb 2007
please.....please.....update....i beg you! cries>

Sicilia- Tue 06 Feb 2007
love it update soon

Unseen Watcher- Tue 06 Feb 2007
Whoohoo! You're back! More reviews later when I'm not at school. *waggles finger* Learn to bend before something breaks Sess!

Trice- Mon 05 Feb 2007
The chapter is well worth the wait. I am glad to see you writing on this story again. So the truth finally comes out. It will be interesting to see how long Sess shows his true feeling towards Kagome. Can't wait to read your next chapter.

Cuddles 4 Sesshomaru- Mon 08 Jan 2007
Love the story...please tell me when you update....

Rainwolf- Fri 05 Jan 2007
omg!!! i love this so far. this is one of my top favorites! when will you continue i cant wait

reina- Sat 23 Dec 2006
hahahaha, i loved that last line of chapter three, it was extremely amusing ^_^

Unseen Watcher- Sat 23 Dec 2006
There you are! HiiiI!! I'm glad Kag won. I always root for whoever is fighting against The Smug One. Whoever it may be. It's about time she came clean. No holding back or I won't feel sorry if he punishes her! Bad! (no you, her). Thank you!

kagsesskyo- Sat 23 Dec 2006
That was an awesome chapter!!!! I can't wait for you to update the next chaptersoon!!!! XD

Sicilia- Sun 19 Nov 2006
What kind of games does Kagome's beast has in her mind??? :P

kagsesskyo- Thu 16 Nov 2006
I love this chapter!!!!!! It was soooooo good I can't wait for you to update the nexzt chapter!!! XD

Unseen Watcher- Thu 16 Nov 2006
Oh, and I'm glad that it was another female she encountered, though I admit to some confusion at times as to which female the story is focusing on. Sess confrontation with her beast might actually clear up somethings that she herself is too afraid/reluctant to; such as how she got cursed, what's she's gone through, and How to be totally free of that curse. ...

Cuddles 4 Sesshomaru- Tue 31 Oct 2006
OMG I LOVE this story
UPDATE SOON PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

helikesitheymikey!- Sun 29 Oct 2006
will kags go through the well?
will sessy follow?
will souta threaten fluffy?
will gramps try to do....what would gramps do?
that would be interesting Lord Sesshonaru looking 500years in the future, in the dark, for his missing mate that's in heat.
*radio announcer story theme music*WILL HE FIND KAGOME..... WILL HE FIGURE OUT HER SECRET..... WILL SOUTA CALL SOMEONE A STUPID-HEAD.....
WELL....WILL IT??*blink*
just an idea....and if I got it somewhat *very unprobable* right please don't change it to something totally different....that's happened to people before....they guess what MIGHT happen and since that person guessed correctly the author changes the idea completely.....and if you don't want story input or radio announcer voices in reviews just let me know.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kagsesskyo- Sat 21 Oct 2006
Awesome!!!!!!! PLZ update soon!!!

Silk_Worm- Wed 18 Oct 2006
hi- great chapter. I'd been waiting for you to update this fic. and kagome slap Sesshomaru? ha! that's a first....

looks like kags is taking her dear old time to mate with sesshomaru....his poor beast!!!
*giggle*

update soon
ta!
Silk_Worm

Megan Consoer- Sat 23 Sep 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Ginny- Thu 21 Sep 2006
love the story so far! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Raven88- Wed 20 Sep 2006
More Chapters Please:)

Unseen Watcher- Wed 20 Sep 2006
Ah, confusion and stubbornness. Always lovely combinations in a relationship. Misunderstandings galore. 9_9 I wonder who will crack first? As for your story schedule...I admit that this story is a bit dearer to my heart than the others, so I don't mind you breaking your routine at all! ^_^

qarry- Tue 19 Sep 2006
I love this story. It has got to be one of the best Sess/Kag stories that I have read in a long time. Please update again soon.

Faye- Mon 18 Sep 2006
this is such an enticing story! I simply can not wait for the next chapter!

Silk_Worm- Mon 18 Sep 2006
hi-
another great chapter!! Kagome is so nice to be playing with rin in this chapter.

I hope that Sesshomaru trusts kagome soon and Kagome tells him.....seriously they're MATES..they need to fully mate and that's gonna be soon right?
*hopeful eyes*

please update soon-
ja
Silk_worm

ShadowChick- Mon 18 Sep 2006
thank you i was going crazy waiting for this chapter sometimes i wander how people come up with stories like u do this is totally awesome

Kitsune Within- Sat 16 Sep 2006
Yaaa! another story down. I dicided i would randomly read all your stories when i had the time so nomater what u updated i'd be happy. So thats three down. I've read 'breeding school' 'wounded heart' and now 'unexpected' do u have any sugestions of wich one i should read next.

o ya and i like Kagome's demon powers in this one.

Silk_Worm- Fri 08 Sep 2006
great fanfic, especially the part of kagome being nice and a motherly sort. please update as soon as possible.......

ja

Silk_worm

Metis- Tue 05 Sep 2006
Count your blessings. I have statistics homework. (mimes asphyxiation)

Metis- Tue 05 Sep 2006
I'm with Ryouta's on this. (wink) Well, InuYasha seems as wishy-washy as ever. And it looks like Kag can teach Sess a thing or two in love games as well. heh.

Metis- Tue 05 Sep 2006
Wow. How did I miss all those updates?! The scent-marking was a nice touch. This story is rather refreshing. Instead of human-to-youkai she is youkai-cursed-to-human. Very nice. And what a surprise for Sess. Having him in ignorance and false assumptions is rather amusing. I look forward to seeing how she disabuses him of them.

serenity- Fri 25 Aug 2006
great story a bit confusing at times but amazing job and i hope u write more soon :)

Metis- Thu 24 Aug 2006
If I forgot to mention this before, I just want to say how glad I am that she has no lingering feelings. Her indecisiveness starts to grate after a while.

sumire- Thu 24 Aug 2006
heeheeheee.. stupid inuyasha--i mean, oh so sad. XD
3 hurray for updates! :D
the story's realllly getting interesting~! i was so excited to find this updated! please update again as soon as you can!

sumire- Thu 24 Aug 2006
heeheeheee.. stupid inuyasha--i mean, oh so sad. XD
3 hurray for updates! :D
the story's realllly getting interesting~! i was so excited to find this updated! please update again as soon as you can!

Twilight Garden- Wed 23 Aug 2006
update soon this was a really good story and i enjoyed all of the chapters that i read.

Lady_Midnight- Wed 23 Aug 2006
Wonderful chapter and story. Can't wait for the next one. But i must say i was really upset with Kagome for the remark she made to Inuyasha about his mother, in this story she dropped a couple of points for me. But even still wondeful story.

Azmaira- Wed 23 Aug 2006
I really like this story. Please write more I dont want it to end yet.

Shikon Godess- Wed 23 Aug 2006
love the plot and looking foward to what crazy idea you can come up with next. Update soon

YASHA_YURI_79- Wed 23 Aug 2006
I LOVE THIS PLEASE UPDATE ASAP

sesshoumarunoairashii- Wed 23 Aug 2006
Loved it!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (sorry my finger slipped) {:o)

Arianna- Wed 23 Aug 2006
Just wanted to let you know that your work is truly wonderful. You have a amazing writing style with a good grasp of plot and well incorporated dialogue. Thank you so much for writing this piece and I am eagerly awaiting the rest!

Kita Tsuki- Wed 23 Aug 2006
Awesome! Update soon! Peace.

Megan Consoer- Mon 21 Aug 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

lady lilly- Sun 20 Aug 2006
I love the story. Updated as soon as you can. It is really good. Can't wait to see the reuion.

Yukino- Sun 20 Aug 2006
Hi,

Please change the ff. in Chapter 7:

1. "Quite fooling around" - Quit fooling around
2. "He sounded so confidant" - distiction between "confidant" & "confident" - Check the ditionary or thesaurus for the usage so that you'll be able to distinguish between the two.

Yukino- Sun 20 Aug 2006
Hi,

Kindly correct the following in chapter 3.

1. Distinction between 'than' and 'then'.
2. "I will tear them limp from limp when I find them." - I believe this should be limb from limb.
3. Distinction between 'affects' and 'effects'.'

Metis- Sun 20 Aug 2006
She's a youkai cursed to be a human?! You never cease to suprise me with how great your stories are! Yeah! Maybe it'll also lower the angst factor when the 'mated without her consent' thing comes up....anything's possible.

ness- Sun 20 Aug 2006
Great story so far!!! Hoping to see another update soon... Later

Tea- Sat 19 Aug 2006
Wow what a surprising fic. This has indeed captured my attention. Also a recent update. So far I've been reading fics that havent been touched in months. I'll stick around this awesome find. Update again soon!

sumire- Sat 19 Aug 2006
AGH!!! The story is just getting REALLY interesting... and it stopped... >o
Please update when you can!
3 I love your writing style and this plot is really clever!!!! I hope to see another installment in the near future!

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