Oh my god that scene that awsome, I can't blame you for starting the story off with her being with koga, they're my second favorite inuyasha couple and I like wolves anyway but strangely koga was my second love when it came to the series. But enough blabbering for now I can't wait till you write more this story's gonna be great I can tell.

How come it says that you have done something new to your story, but when i look for something new, like a fixing of editing, or more paragraphs, i dont find anything of the sort? everything is the exact same, same words, same number of words, same number of chapters, nothing is different at all!
If you are going to post a new chapter, post it already and dont make your readers who love this story think "oh! YAY! she's posted a new chapter!" or "i was wondering when she would post next! i wonder if we will find out what inuyasha's reaction is!" i swear, i will totaly rate this as a 4 if you keep on doing what you are doing! i love this story, but if you keep on making readers like me who have never read a vampire story like this, and a great OOC thing with kags, then i will! i swear it! im giving you three more months, but if you do not do something about these false information on a new chapter or editation, then i will do what i forementioned!!!!!!!
well, other than that, TTFN!
joanne
PS: i know that i sound very impatinent and mean, but can you blame me? this is the only good vampire story i have ever read, with such a unique characterization for kags that i can't help but be mad when it was a long time ago that you up-dated, then i see this story on the recently up-dated page, and nothing new had happened to it! Grrr!

oh wow please update sooon

holy crap ur good. update please

Awesome story love the gore cant wait till kagome and sesshoumaru go at it ;)

please write more i really like ur story

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

okay that was both cool and cruel but yet it was awesome! I can't wait till i read more it's got me hoped like another one of u'r fics ^^

there is absolutely nothing wrong withthe way you have portrayed Kagome, you unlike many others have stepped out of the pure-niave-miko box many place her in and instaed turned her into and ass-kicking-i-run-this-shyt woman, or vampire in this case lol and it is freakin' AWESOME!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! so keep up the good work, cuz i can't wait to see how this story unfolds! ^_^ smooches ^_^

Im such a sucker for vampires...*sigh* the guys are sooo hot...lolz. Is Kagome and Sesshomaru evenutally gonna hook up? Is he gonna become a vamp? I hope so....

Toodles!!!

Much Love, PunkrockerX

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

So Inuyasha actually got off to his supposed "mother." Wow and he did not find that disturbing? Anyway liked the chapter especially the tidbit at the end. Until next time

I definitely agree, Kagome is so much better OC haha. You seriously have to update soon though, this is really great. Not many good vampire fics are out there, this is definitely the best one I have ever read. Yay to hentai-ness!!! ^__^!

I love this story. Please keep it up. It's very different than all the others, and I find it's uniquness intriguing.

Wonderful fanfic thus far!! I can defenitely tell that this story will become one of my favorites.

Much Love, PunkrockerX

I LOVE THAT SITE!

Haha, and yeah I"m pretty sure you can put those lemons up, just make sure to label them and you should be A-okay! ^_^ Update soon!!

I really hope you dodn't take that offensive either, I was not in any way trying to be a huge bitch haha, I just hate going back and forth between sites, besides if people actually are into vampires and know a lot about them like we do, they should be prepared for gory things like this right? haha

I love the darkness. And Kagome as a badass is absolutely wonderful. The bit about Kouga was a bit shocking, but refreshing at the same time. I love this story alot so please continue.

woot... good chapter.... love the clothing... I want to buy some... probably cannot afford it... anyway I look forward to the next chapter... until then

awesome story update ASAP!!!

*cocks head* You have Nc-17 down .. but you're not putting the lemons up .. that's kind of weird ... anyway .. god chapter, update soon.

Hi,

Kindly correct the following :
1. "She had learned of Yasumi’s discover and killed him" - Should be discovery.

2. “Hardly. I assume that Sango is here, as if Rin, Kagura and Naraku?” - Modify this sentence into
"... Sango is here, together with Rin, Kagura, and Naraku?"

3. “My lady…you have been expected by my master.” - This would be better with "My master has been expecting you."

Nice chapter. BTW, I think you can post lemons here. Just don't post lemons in FF.net

cool beans... nice lemon too... so Kouga is the lover... oh yeah question.... what exactly did Kikyo do to be sent to the sixth level? She took a human? I am confused.. I am a slow thinker... anyway good chapter.... until next time

Umm... sorry if i scared you. i didnt preread my review..i just kinda wrote what i was feeling. i didnt mean to come off as some psycopath....lol. Thanks for the thanks. I can understand how you would want to rant, writing a fanfiction is hard and takes alot of effort. You have to plan everything before hand, making the plot bunnies pop out and then finding some way to make them stay in their homes for a while. Writing a sesshomaru/kagome pairing is one of the hardest, because they are soo different, and like you said, you dont want to change them too much. Sesshomaru is an enigma, an allure, a god (couldn't help myself), he has so much depth that we dont see with most of the charaters in the show, for example inuyasha. inuyasha is easy to change because he changes in the seires so often. Seshomaru, in every episode and movie i have seen him in, has stayed the same, poker-faced, mono-tone demon. i think, personally, it would be horrible if you changed him, he is fine the way he is! great interpretation of kouga by the way. im glad someone has taken notice of the 'non-idiot' side of him. he really is a great character. keep updating, cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

Ah, such another beautifully written chapter. Its a shame I haven't got the time to do my own vampire story, which is exactly why I love reading others. And this one is at the top of my list. Thanks for such a wonderful read.

Kiba

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

[= No problem.

Riveting chapter!

Hmmm... well this chapter was less 'disturbing' but I loved it none the less. I love vampire stories, brrr... they give me chills, in a GOOD way. I love that movie 'Underworld'........ I think im gunna watch it right now, muhahahaha... ANYWAY! Cant wait for your next chapter...

ttyl,

Dunno...

i liked it....very interesting and very well written.

Finally! A true vampire story! To heaven with those mushy love stories, for they could never capture the unusual rapture and pleasure of a TRUE Hells-childern story. Vampires were never ment to feel, and those idiotic tales of killing with holy-water...being burnt by water! It's ridiculous! Vampires need no feelings, they only need to feed, either from fear or blood. I thank you for returning the amazing trials of the vampires, and for having enough courage to brake away from the norm of emotional beasts. Keep up the exquisit work.

this fic is so twisted and i like it write another chapter real soon.

I love this fic! As sadistic as it is it has still drawn me in, and I can not wait to read more. Keep up the amazing job!

woot... the creature that was made sounded awesome... much blood shed... oh how I love it... great chapter... until next time

hmm...ive always been a sucker for vampires. its off to a great start so i hope u update soon cuz i'll be waiting.

... Hmmmm.... Disturbing.... Hope thats what you were going for...

freakin sweet. keep up the good work.

O, wow. I loved it. I can't wait to see where it leads. Please don't listen if anyone has anything bad to say, since I loved it. Of course, I also have a thing for vampire stories, so this is totally going to be a favorite of mine.

Kiba

Excellent job. Although shouldn't it be a Prologue not an Epilogue seeing as you are opening the story and not concluding it?

This is really good, I love vampires ^_^

Update soon!

Me? I favor vampire stories and I love the way you write. Its so aluring so.......captivating. I love your story keep writing I want to find out more about this Emma-o. ^.^ please update soon. T.T

cool beans... a vampire story... I have not read one in a while. So I will continue to read, unless there are no more chapters present after this one. I would definitely would like to see more. Until next time

please update

i love the first chapter:D