I love it!! Please update soon. I kind of feel pity for Inuyasha but then he dserves it for betraying his family and Sesshy wouldn't be in his current situation if it weren't for him. He deserves Kikyo's hell. As for sesshy, to trust Kagome. And does Kagome have stronger miko powers than ikyo since her sister is not pure? Btw-NEVER ALLOW KAGOME TO ORDER SESSHY TO HER BED!!!!!! It just seems wrong somehow; crass, vulgar and lsuttish. Also, it demaning, you know? He didn't decide or even if he did what he wnated didn't matter and that is just plain wrong. Don't allow Sesshy to smell her arousla or naything, keep her thoughts a bit innocnet untillater-everyone BORES me with this line, "he smelled her arousal and smirked inwardly, she wanted him." Boring! SO make it interesting. Take things slow. And no arousla smelling at the touch of his hand on her cheek or the like. Please hurry up, I want to read the next xhappie! The story is fab, although I didn't think I'd be interested if it was going to be a lemony slave thinga ma jiggy so I checked out of a hope a of a plot and you had one way beyond my expectations! This story is equal to your other one's, sorry for doubtiing. Update all your stories, since I didn't review on the others.
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ShadowChick- Mon 04 Sep 2006
| this is totally awesome plz write more
I really love your story and would love to read more of it when you write another chapter. Soon, I hope.
~Atie
Cassie- Tue 25 Jul 2006
| Please continue to write your story. I really like where it's going and I want to see what happens with it! So, please continue!
it is really good. i hope you update soon. please tell me when you do.
| I demand you give me a good explanation as to why this story is unfinished!
eternityoftears- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| Good chapter. please update soon, i can't wait to see kagome find out that Sesshoumaru is the Taiyoukai heir!
moonshinegirl- Sun 09 Jul 2006
i love the story please update soon. make sess and kag intereact more or make sess jeoulose of kagoem w/another guy. doesn't materr please update soon
jem89- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| I love this story! Please update soon :)
kagome15- Thu 06 Jul 2006
| please update ASAP!!!! LOVE the story!!!! its really good keep it up!!
Dawn- Thu 06 Jul 2006
| Although I've read a couple more fics on this theme, I must admit to being rather intrigued with the way you're developing this idea. I really like your writing style, and honestly hope you'll be inspired to continue the story :)
mortefille- Wed 05 Jul 2006
| dude keep writing and update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^.^
Lady Contrary- Wed 05 Jul 2006
| Wow I like your story so I hope you update so soon!
| I really like this idea. You've got a lot of really awesome stuff packed into this story, and I love it! This story reminds me of a book I once read (although you've probably never heard of it), called the Invisible Ring. I'd reccomend it to you, if you have the time to read it. Anyhow, great story! I can't wait to read more.
| I reallly liked this please update soon.
Netealia Foxwood- Wed 05 Jul 2006
| I've read this before though i remember there being more chapters to it... anyway this is a good story and i can't wait for it to catch up to its former chapters then update! Well Chow.
cherry- Wed 28 Jun 2006
| GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!^_^
Eternityoftears- Tue 27 Jun 2006
| Wow. I must say i find this very interesting. Please update soon, I look forward to reading more!! ^_^
Michelle- Tue 27 Jun 2006
Whoa this fic is awesome.
I definitely love it.
Please update soon :]
spiffiness- Tue 27 Jun 2006
| mmm hot! Can't wait to see where you take it next!
Avari phoeix Sebrof- Tue 27 Jun 2006
(Don't mind spelling errors!)
This is absolutely awsome. I love it and it's so creative. It's kind of sad though but it just adds more spice. I can only ask that you don't take forever to update!... please?
| aww! I hope there will be a scene where Sesshomaru will understand that Kagome WON'T hurt him...this is interesting...I kinda expected Kikyo and Kagome would be nice sisters, but whatever floats the story's boat ^^ I wish to know more of Sesshomaru's past in the next chapter...or maybe some fluff ^^ At least he knows that Kagome wasn't intentionally causing him pain in her dream..
Rowen- Tue 27 Jun 2006
| Oh hell Ya! I like this. Update ASAP!
linjcon- Tue 27 Jun 2006
| I started reading this on the fanfiction site and hoped you would update and never did. I hope you plan on finishing this story. I really enjoyed it.
Cassie- Tue 27 Jun 2006
| I really like your story. It's very different and refreshing! I like how it is going, and I really hope to read more soon! Please continue to write!
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