Lilz- Fri 29 Dec 2006
I love this too!!! Your stories are so original; they make me tear up with laughter! I hope you update soon, and I hope you email me when you do!!!

Lady- Sat 16 Sep 2006
Please update soon! This story is great!

Sakura- Fri 15 Sep 2006
I love your story and can't wait for the next update which I hope t be very soon. You asked whta kind of fairytales the readers like and I would have to say that my favorites are The Little Mermaid, Beauty and the Beast, Snow White, Rapuzel, Cinderella, and the Princess and the Pea.

Nyri- Sun 06 Aug 2006
I've very much enjoyed what you've written so far, and I'm happy I happened to stumble upon this story. The writing and story development are excellent, and you've melded the IY world and characters quite well with the Sleeping Beauty fairytale.

The only question I had after Chapter 3 was why Shippou or any of his clan could not have attempted to remove the poison from Kagome's body. I probably need to go back and re-read some details, but I don't remember there being any set of criteria for the youkai who would ultimately rescue Kagome. I just thought the youkai would have to be willing but that there were no willing youkai, given the breach of trust between humans and youkai. Yet, apparently, Shippou and his clan have been well-disposed towards Kagome and have been protecting the castle all these years. So, when Shippou offered to help, I thought he was going to try and remove the poison himself but that we would eventually learn something about the curse that would make it so that Sesshoumaru is the only one ultimately capable of saving Kagome...

Of course, I probably missed something, or it will all make sense in later chapters. After all, Shippou is still a child, and now that I think about it, perhaps his clan wanted to protect Kagome just because of the Shikon Jewel and didn't really know about the whole poison removal part. =P

Anyway, I was going to delete all that now that I've settled it in my own head, but I thought you might be interested in seeing what's going on in the head of your readers. ^_~

Once again, great job, and I look forward to reading more!

[I originally read your story on MediaMiner, but I was having trouble leaving a review there.]

angel wolf- Fri 04 Aug 2006
This is a great fic! Keep going with it, I can't wait to see what happens!

Amber Myst- Tue 11 Jul 2006
Once again, I love the humor in your writing. And as always, it makes reading it so much more enjoyable. I absolutely *adore* Sesshoumaru's witty, sarcastic attitude. I find it hilarious. It's also nice to see Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha at least getting along to the point where the former doesn't want to murder the latter. Inuyasha's adoration is adorable and Sesshoumaru's annoyance is even more amusing. I can't wait for you to update and I wish you luck with the divemaster tests!

Amber Myst

KageFaiaDoragon- Sun 09 Jul 2006
this was the best!!!! i totally luved it!! hope they find each other soon!
plz plz update soon! it was great!

Kuma- Sat 08 Jul 2006
awesome update soon...wy did he lie?

cherry- Sat 08 Jul 2006
Great!!!!! and good luck on your diving thing.^_^

mortefille- Sat 08 Jul 2006
update!!!!!!!!!!!! again ^.^

Kanela- Thu 06 Jul 2006
hey! i'm loving it! update!

Karen- Mon 03 Jul 2006
Oh my gosh, I love this fic! The characters are comical and sarcastic, yet still very true to themselves. I can't wait to see how they end up together.

I especially loved Kagome's reaction to "The Full Monty," so to speak. It immediately brought my mind to a section of my favorite IY doujinshi (if you want to see what I'm talking about, you can download it here: http://www. yousendit. com/transfer. php?action= download&ufid= B56C000447A2BB46 .....The part I'm talking about is on pages 23-24).

If you haven't already accepted a beta, I'd be happy to offer my services.

I wish you a writer's-block-free week!

Lizzie Welling- Sun 02 Jul 2006
I love this story! I've always enjoyed fairy tales, and this InuYasha twist is wonderfully done. I can't wait to see where this goes. Please post soon!

cherry- Wed 28 Jun 2006
Kagome is great. GREAT STORY! UPDATE SOON.^_^

mortefille- Tue 27 Jun 2006
omg I love your fic its so refreshing compared to others. Well keep writing. I hear you need a beta reader I would love to help out. ^.6

Kuma- Tue 27 Jun 2006
i like it alot i like ur style of writing its not all made up....and its not based in 2006 or the sengoku jidai...welll update soon

Lady Contrary- Tue 27 Jun 2006
I really like your story so far! Your writing style is very good. I hope you update soon! ^_^ Oh and if you need a beta still I'd be more than happy to help.

Midnight_Goddess- Mon 26 Jun 2006
I loved it! This is a wonderful story i love the plot line and the characters. Kagome is a little ooc-ish but i like her spunk. Sesshomaru has such a witty banter to him i just fell in love with him as soon as he started talking. Inuyasha seems somewhat young in this story a I'm guessing thats thats the way he is suppose to be he sounds so cute and child like. Jaken is like jaken so warm and fuzzy don't you think lol! I like that you took an old fairy tale and gave it a new twist that shows that you have wonderful creative personal style. Keep up the good work! Good Luck

Goddess

Leunra- Mon 19 Jun 2006
Well the baby is cold...is it temperature wise or attitude wise cause that's a given. Plus we all know Sesshoumaru is special, why else are we dedicating this site partially about him?
Yes, no one in Inuyasha world stays dead. Also Kikyo is bearable to some extent, actually there's moments where I like her more than Kagome in the anime. Something about Kagome sounding whiny in the american version, I don't know.
Anyway good luck with the writing, I'm looking forward to another chapter.

KillingPerfection- Mon 19 Jun 2006
very good job! ^_^
i love it!
i'm guessing that the other baby is Sesshomaru-sama?
well anyways, very good job. write more PLEZ!!!!!!

Beth13- Mon 19 Jun 2006
I really like this story. :] It has a great story line, and I hope you update really soon! Keep up the good work!

Faye- Mon 19 Jun 2006
Great job on this! I like your changes to the story and I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!!!

Duchesscarml- Mon 19 Jun 2006
Very well done! Lovely. Like you, I believe it isn't impossible to make an inuYasha fic out of a Fairy-tale. You are off to a great start!! Keep up the good work. I am looking forward to your updates.

~Duchess

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Mon 19 Jun 2006
This is was just so good. I like that it because it is a different take on the whole Sess/Kag thing. Update soon.

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