This was a very good one-shot. It has great possibities for a bit longer short story. I loved it. You are a good writer. I always like your stories and will look forward to more of them. Great job :)

Cute story Iliked it

No, that wasn't vague (that the boy was Sesshoumaru).. but that was so bittersweet... I felt like something more should happen--another chance meeting, or some sort of extra interaction should occur between the two.. this story makes me sad/hopeful... Good work as always, I hope to see more of your stuff in the future (maybe with more interaction, yeah? ~__^ )
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so basically they never end up..... hpmh... i dont know i am not content

i like it... aw... to tell you the truth this is one of th most touching stories i've ever read... even if this didn't make me cry...anyway.... nice story....

Other than my dislike of the thought of Sesshomaru dying. Great story!

Loved that!... vagueness and all (>ω)/ [I'm pretty sure another one-shot related with this concept sounds pretty cool, what do you think, eh?

That was fantastic! I loved it! Man, the way you described those cookies and cake made me really hungry for something sweet. Mmmm....I liked how you brought Sesshomaru back as a human (?) boy. That was a heck of an idea. And you placed Kagome's personality perfectly. Creme de la creme! Fansatic!

*laughs* Well, that was certainly on original story - Sess as a reincarnation?
Hopefully you'll write some more fanfiction!