Okay this is good but get a better reader and it whould be even more cool.

But yeah, like they said, get a good beta and it will be even more awsome!!!

OMG!! You red Maximum Ride: The Angel Experimint, didn't you?!?! AHHH!!! I love that book! Okay, good story so far! Keep it up!

- Ray
P.S. the 2nd book in the series just came out, Mximum Ride: Schools out forever, at least I think that's the title.