Radioactiveorange- Sat 11 Aug 2007
I like this story a lot but the last few chapters get sloppy. The conversations are all smooshed together instead of having a line for themselves. Maybe a little of editing is in order? For example, the last chapter seems its made of 3 big paragraphs when I know the conversations are just squashed into them. I really do love this story though!

Shaedow- Sun 28 May 2006
This is interesting! Keep up the good work. I will be looking forward to reading your next chapter...So please update soon!

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