Dont Discontinue it, I know I will soon have bad reviews of my own fics but, I believe that each writers has their own writting Skills and your Skills are great, please dont listen to everyone's point of view, they are trying to get to you...

~ o:) Angel O:)~

soo... im guessing that kag is besomig a demo and is being controlled??? hmmm plz update soon! adn clear these things up!! plz and thanx! i luv it!

I believe i'm done with reading this story....i've been hardly able to follow as one chapter bearly flows into the next....the characters are almost completely out of character other than sesshoumaru, who is just slightly less than sango....
sango would never kiss someone so casually

she would be sobbing her eyes out if kagome was dead

i know you said something in the note on the first page about this not being focused on kag/sess...and i understand and respect that...but for crying out loud....this is a kag/sess site....tad confusing why you posted on here and not say a place like fanfiction.net

i understand that you are trying to run this as a military report type fic...or so it seams....but it makes no sense....fanfics need at least some emotion to make them flow...your characters are bearly faces, just words on a page...they have zero depth

sooo....kag is dead.....miroku is dead...i think...rite? will kag evr come bac? wuh exactly happened to miroku.... and shippou too!!! and kikyou...ya thats about it.. plz update and answer these questions soon! i luv it!

hmmm i was pretty sure that the "beautiful lady " was kag bu o well! maybe kag and the reast are at the village too! heh ! plz update sooN i luv it!!!

i luv ur storie!!!!!! plz plz plz plz plz update soon! i luv it!!!!hopefully they will all meet up wit kag and them soon! its a really kewl plot!!!!! it was great!plz update soon! thanx!