helikesitheymikey!- Tue 06 Mar 2007
THIS IS SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ya know at the end of the fic Sessy's mom and inu's mom should blame Inu-no-tashio for everything bad in their lives and put a binding spell on him!!!!!!!!!!!!!

helikesitheymikey!- Tue 06 Mar 2007
THIS IS SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ya know at the end of the fic Sessy's mom and inu's mom should blame Inu-no-tashio for everything bad in their lives and put a binding spell on him!!!!!!!!!!!!!

helikesitheymikey!- Tue 06 Mar 2007
THIS IS SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ya know at the end of the fic Sessy's mom and inu's mom should blame Inu-no-tashio for everything bad in their lives and put a binding spell on him!!!!!!!!!!!!!

litlest_amazon- Mon 05 Feb 2007
ok. I'm going to be brutally honest here. I think you two have an interesting idea for a fan fic but you REALLY need someone to beta it. Just from the introduction of our two authors I was turned off by the grammar and spelling. I thought give it a chance maybe they put all of their thought into the chapters instead.
I tried to read the first paragraph of chapter one and the death of the coma struck me as a tragedy. Too many phrases are trying to be turned and not enough thought or grammar checking is going into the flow of the piece.
Chapter two was a little more promising. The grammar dilema still persists, however, it was slightly better - though this may be due to the fact that all that I read was dialogue.

Simply from skimming this I can say that I would not be able to read one chapter in a sitting. I am afraid I've been spoiled by well edited pieces with plot and character development. I can't judge on the last two, but of the former you are in dire need of assistance.

Darkness- Sun 21 Jan 2007
please continue please

Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Mon 08 Jan 2007
OMG Please update!! You Haven't Updated In Ages And This Is Such A Great Story!! Please!!!! I Shalt Love You Both Forever If You Update!!

Pretty Please!!

rara- Tue 16 May 2006
hehehehehehe! keep going!

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