| i love this story. i hope you update soon. and just so you know, i am a little bit of a dark kind of girl, so if there is a rape in here, it won't bother me, but i think that you should make him suduce her instead. update very soon, please.
harryhollow1- Sat 12 May 2007
| i just gotta read more hehehe!! please email me whenever you update real soon!!
Fluffy'sMate17- Thu 23 Nov 2006
| Interesting. I like it! Good luck with the next chapter!
sakurachan_1- Tue 19 Sep 2006
ohhh man!!! you had to leave it like that ... T_T (tear, tear) why, you'r so evil u_u .... j/k
up date soon
alexa- Sat 16 Sep 2006
| you can't stop there!
hi-
excellent story!! I just hope that Sesshomaru doesn't have to go and rape Kagome....he should just go right out and tell kagome the situation....and the fact they'll be having full-youkai children... *wink*
please update as soon as you can and if you have time, drop me a line at
Silk_worm_01@yahoo.com
or just send me a message on the 'contact author link' on the profile.
ja!
silk_worm
Metis- Sat 16 Sep 2006
| Whatever slight hint of feminism I allow (which is nothing compared to the disgust I have for those who shriek about things like having doors opened for them) hopes fervently that she will be able to repel him until he asks/begs/wins her favor!
Sesshomaru4lyfe- Sat 16 Sep 2006
| That story was GREAT!!! I can't wait to read your update!!!! :>)
45cats- Fri 15 Sep 2006
| This is really quite good so far. One thing, unless you did this intentionally; Kagome is trying to teach Rin to speak English properly, or Japanese. It just jumped out at me for some reason, but it's not distracting or anything. I thought it was cute. Also, you do very well without a beta, but I can see how much easier it would be to have one. I can't proofread my own stuff to save my life. I like the way you have written the characters and your Sessh is not out of line.
amy- Thu 14 Sep 2006
| interesting story. keep up the good work! update soon!
phxazkyote- Thu 14 Sep 2006
| I ahve been waiting forever for you to get this story going!!! Need a beta huh? I can help!
elcie your friend- Thu 14 Sep 2006
| hey about time you updated!!!! jk i loved the chapter though i wish that you would make them longer since i don't have the time to read them in the computer and hve to take it to class. how's your life?
kotainuchan- Thu 14 Sep 2006
| Like it so far
kambri_Jade- Tue 29 Aug 2006
It's a curse to be with Sesshomaru in this fic! lol But this fic is really cool, and I like where it is going. So keep up the good work! And update ASAP!!!!!!!
Kambri_Jade
Kay- Fri 14 Jul 2006
| finish....plz
phxazkyote- Tue 20 Jun 2006
| Are you gonna update? This really is a cute story.
Tori- Wed 07 Jun 2006
| This is great I love your stories, please keep up the good work. Take the time to handling your own things then come back to this. a well rested mind is a good one
Megan Consoer- Sun 21 May 2006
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
mars- Sat 13 May 2006
| This is so good I'm ready for more Sesshoumaru/Kagome action, but noe rush. Poor Sesshoumaru he has had self control for 2 years, now he's at the end of his rope. Even more sad is that his soldiers catches his rage and anger.
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