Meara- Sun 15 Jul 2007
This is a nice story; well thought out and executed. There is one problem, however. There is a woeful lack of punctuation. This is a good story and the lack it makes the tale harder to read. Remember - commas, periods and even exclation points are your friends.

Seriously, a beta reader would sove this problem. Learning to use it properly is simply a matter of practice.

I look forward to reading more!

Meara

elvira- Sun 15 Jul 2007
wow...this is awsome!!...please more chapters!!

Arryelle- Sun 15 Jul 2007
Toooo cute I hope you update soon this fic is awesome a little confusing at times but still great!

Arry

Megan Consoer- Fri 08 Jun 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Eva D,McMillan- Thu 12 Oct 2006
All I can say is your good.Pleas tell me your going to rite the next chapter soon.O and keep up the great work.Eva

vivian- Fri 15 Sep 2006
Please write more!

Rachel Haag- Tue 20 Jun 2006
I really love your story and can't wait to read more. please wright more I'd like to see how it ends. I also like that you made Kagome a silver fox demon it really suits her. And having Shippo have miko powers very cool.
Keep doing what you'r doing I love it. Can't wait to read more.

Rachel Haag- Tue 20 Jun 2006
I really love your story and can't wait to read more. please wright more I'd like to see how it ends. I also like that you made Kagome a silver fox demon it really suits her. And having Shippo have miko powers very cool.
Keep doing what you'r doing I love it. Can't wait to read more.

Rachel Haag- Tue 20 Jun 2006
I really love your story and can't wait to read more. please wright more I'd like to see how it ends. I also like that you made Kagome a silver fox demon it really suits her. And having Shippo have miko powers very cool.
Keep doing what you'r doing I love it. Can't wait to read more.

Amy- Mon 22 May 2006
ohhh nice chapter!!! update asap

IXthy- Sat 20 May 2006
Hey,

I'm not really one to review, so this might lack most of the things an author is looking for - constructive criticism, helpful advice, mindless praise, etc - but I wanted to say that I found the idea behind this little fanfic to be quite interesting and the text, except for a few, minor, grammar and spelling mistakes, fairly well-written. I'm looking forward to seeing how you choose to develop the story.

Good luck and loads of inspiration.
IXthy.

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