Hey hey! Cool fic but you need to add a second A to "Okaa-san" and it would be SUPER easier to read if you didn't put two or more character's "talking" into one paragraph. You know what I mean? Like...press the return button before typing someone's "Speech". Meh anyways thats just my suggestion. If you are needing a beta just hit me up okay? I'm pretty damn good at Japanese and my English isn't half bad either :P Ciao :D

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

omg i loved ur fanfic!! its so awesome!! plz tell me we dnt have to wait too long for an update? *puppy dog eyes*
plz dnt let kags just fall at his feet tho that wud be funny if it happened literally lol. kags is a fighter! :)
keep up the great work!!!!! lyca x