Very interesting story! It was sad yet kind of sweet. I liked it. I'm not sure a sequel would do it justice. I think it's nice the way it is, albeit, I love happy endings and this one was not so happy...it still was good.

Well done :-)

TTVTT that was amazing! good job!

*sheepishly* do you think there might be a short sequel?

I like a story I can relate to, though I noticed a few small grammar errors... Ah, no one can be perfect, I'm not.
Great short story.

Beautiful. It made my cry a bit which shows that it was done really well.

~RSF

This is actually really good! I read it a few times and the first time I felt sad. The second time I read it, I cried my heart out! It's really great despite it being so sad.