For a title to this story...how about
"Winning Kagome's Heart" or "Winning Back Kagome's Love" or maybe "For the Love of Kagome"...just a few suggestions.

Good Luck! Update soon.

I like it so far...when will you update. Will you answer the questions that reviewer 'Posted by helikesitheymikey! (2006-10-12)?

Those are some questions I would like to know too. Please don't leave up hanging on this story...it seems like it might be a good story :)

You had a few grammar and spelling errors through out the story but nothing major...I'm sure you will improve with time.

Good luck and great job do far :-)

UPDATE

UPDATE

I really enjoyed reading your story and can't wait for more. I would like to know how much time has passed since they started living together? Could you please answer that in the next chapter.

man i saw the car n i got to say that car is clean n goes hard
but i really like the fic but it is kinda confusing me wit the almost total acceptence kagome gave sesshomaru

1 what's their daughter's name
2 why did Kag leave in the 1st place?
3 I'm glad that Sess wouldn't go for full custody
4 when is Kag gonna have another baby and Sess can deal with her mood swings?
5 how did they tell their daughter that her father was still alive and what was her reaction?
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ooo this soo good. keep it up.

hey please update soon I love the story.

man i really like this fic PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
update soon

omg this is so friggin awesome! i totally love it! you rock! please update again soon!

Intense. The fic really drew me into the plot.
Thanks!

how about a curved bell?
they were married once,and he seeks to take her back.Only when he sees a child of their flesh does his cause become more righteous.but the question is,will he win kagome's heart or lose it in his battle for revenge on his own wounded love?
it's a thought.and if you like this bit,you can have it.i can't write to save my neck.
good luck,and I look forward to the next chapter.:)

can't wait for more

wow totally luv this! cant wait till the next chapter comes! btw do u have it on fanfiction.net?

I can already tell that this is going to be one of those overly cliche fanfics that I hate to read. Before you go any further, let me tell you that the whole submissive Kagome/ domineering Sesshoumaru is the oldest trick in the book. i.e: Sesshoumaru forcing Kags out of her marriage, 'forcing' her to move in with him, threatening her with full custody. Come on!

I'm not saying to make Kagome a bitch, but you can at least let her stand her ground. Make Sesshoumaru fight tooth and nail to have her and any relationship he may want with his daughter..

One more thing, please don't make the reason why she and Sesshoumaru had broken up to be some stupid misunderstanding. But deff, in the need, they should end up being together.

Take it into consideration.

God Sesshoumaru is scraier than ever. what happens Next?

There are a few words out of place but other than that the story is really good so far! I enjoyed it very much :D

hey...i just loved xD possessive sess uuhauhauhauha it's sooo him the " im taking my wife back" uahauhau..great fic, i read it a "long" time ago and wondered when you were going to put the next cap. ^^
xoxo

Dammit give me another Chapter or else.....

Dammit give me another Chapter or else.....