heh! I loved that ending! Poor little Jaken, having to deal with the fact that Sesshy and Kags might have tons of pups! I really do pitty him...but hell, it's still fun to pester that little guy!
Anyway, Love the story so far, can't wait for an update!
Ja!
michelle- Fri 16 Feb 2007
| hey i love your story it is the best i have read so far and i was just wondering if you know when the next chapter will be out plz let me know ttyl
kagura111- Wed 20 Dec 2006
| This is a realy an ausume story!
mistress butcher- Fri 29 Sep 2006
constancy is the key. With out it you have a mess. In this case your story is a mess. Try editing this, not so much for grammar, but for constancy. If Sesshy saved Kagome and Rin in one chapter, in the next chapter Sesshy, Kagome and Rin should be arriving at Sesshy's castle together.
Not only that but also look for character Constancy. Don't let issues and charater drop off. If you take my advice, I guarantee
you'll have a good story. I'm even willing to beta read for you.
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