don't worry about the mistakes because everyone make them it was one of the best i seen i rather see a good story then worry about the grammer errors

I loved it you should make like a sequal or something!

iv read this story 2 times it really unique to me. it was an awsome story. cant wait to read more from you.

i love this story but it would be great if you made a part 2 to it where the soul of naraku want revenge against sesshomaru and kagome .he take over the body of the lord of the black dragons that hated sesshomaru father. kagome finually gets to see her family again after five hundred years of waiting

So far I'm really enjoying this story... but it's somewhat hard to follow at times :-\ I love your writing, but I think you should probably get a beta for your next story or even to help you revise this one. The flow's a little off and sometimes feels rushed, and the grammar could use some work.

Otherwise, though, I love the story, the plot, and the characterizations are good. :-)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some chapters?

sequel please i loved the story

That was a great story but for your next one watch for grammatical errors

wow what a great stroy!! I really liked it and hope you write more fics soon.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?