Hey folks!

I am in need of a beta to help me out with my latest one shot. Normally I'm happy with my pieces but this one is sitting odd with me, so here's what I need.

-somebody who can look at particulars (not grammar, but if things make sense)
-somebody who can look at characterization and help make suggestions
-somebody who can look at the situation and make suggestions to enhance it if need be
-story suggestions for easier fluidity

grammar is not my concern.

However, let me state I am picky. I will take suggestions as I need them, but I don't take 100% of all suggestions. If I don't feel like it will work, I will probably ignore it so don't expect that every suggestion will be taken.

PM me if you're interested, or reply here. this is for one one shot only, one I'm writing for Sesshys Jaded Samuri. I think i just need a second opinion on things.

Thanks

What? Am I no good anymore??

Ask and ye shall receive, m'dear, if I still count as 'beta to the stars,' anyway!

~~me~~
PS - I KNOW you have the email, right?

lol i love you Wiccan! I just feel bad asking knowing how busy you are and such...and quite frankly, there's something off this story so i didn't really want you to read one you might consider crap

Oh, piffle. Just send it already. I know your writing and I don't imagine it's total crap, even if you think there's something wrong with it. You are ALWAYS your own worst critic, so I'll be the judge of whether or not it's crap, okay??? *wink*

Unless, of course, you really are that reluctant to have me look it over... no hard feelings in that case, you know that. Do what makes you comfy, that's always been one of my favorite [for you... favourite] mottoes!

~~me~~