Joana (Chapter 3) - Sat 17 Jun 2017

I have to agree with Natalia, what was the point in having her sexually violated (raped).  It placed a damper mood in your fanfic and I'm leery about continuing to read any further.

Nene (Chapter 3) - Sat 17 Jun 2017

It would seem your dark theme included rape.  I hate reading fics that purposely include rape, apart from that this seemed like it would be a great fic but unfortunately I will not be able to continue reading. 

Natalia (Chapter 3) - Sat 17 Jun 2017

The idea has merit, it's well written. Aside from my personal opinion and distaste to have her violated which you should put a warning, it captures attention. I just don't understand why violate her? And afterwards she still has reiki? It is it me who misunderstood? I am not an expert and this is strictly my opinion, but in those times the people were highly superstitious and the knowledge that a miko has to be pure to still be a miko and heal was common knowledge. No that doesn't meat it is so since this is fiction but they needed her to heal so why do that? It's contradictory to their needs. I know life in those times was hard I majored in ancient history, but sesshoumaru to find her after she was violated and save her life is sort of.... Cliché? We don't know what happened to her pack and what made her travel but kikyo traveled alone and other mikos as well we're showed as respected and revered by all except youkai. Not attached and raped. The ones to take her were scum but still superstition was a big part of their life, even in the twenty century Japanese people avoided looking at people with blue eyes for fear of bad omen. What I am saying is I like your idea and the writing, I am curious to see more but I feel like something is missing and I can't understand what. That core essence of a fic, maybe the fact is we don't know what happened? It's an emptiness that wants to be filled! I compliment you on writing this, my opinion is only my own and not necessarily true, everything I said is meant as constructive criticism! Take care and good luck!

LadyFugue (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Nice, please more  :) 

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Keep it coming.

kagomesirene (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Just stumbled over this story....i really like it so far XD

....i'm sad to hear that noone of the gang might be left, and saddened to see Kagom struggle with the loss...

...but it's nice that she found a new purpose in life... least she has Rin ...eventueally Srsshoumaru....well even Jaken is better than nothing XD

...hope to read more soon


Ja ne

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Blommie8 (Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Nov 2015

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

Saiya (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

so Sad.

Nile (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

Interesting start... I can't wait to read more.

LadyFugue (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

Please, I'm begging you, keep writing. You are doing great! 

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