Reviews for Intertwined by Alon

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Lazurite (Chapter 71) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Yep. Although it's a bit odd that she's bringing sports equipment to the roof.


Lazurite (Chapter 70) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Yeah then Kikyo walks in, right?


Lazurite (Chapter 69) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

I imagine Kikyo is the cost.


Lazurite (Chapter 65) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

You've got a pronoun missing where Sesshoumaru says "do not like Hiro". It's confusing.


Lazurite (Chapter 62) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

I wish we had cat cafes here too.


Lazurite (Chapter 57) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

That was blunt. Why doesn't he just break up with her then.


Lazurite (Chapter 56) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

That doesn't seem like such a good idea on Kikyo's part.


Lazurite (Chapter 53) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

So no swimming cat after all that?


Lazurite (Chapter 52) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

That was a great line.


Lazurite (Chapter 48) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Ah that explains some things.


roberta. (Chapter 71) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

First why be mad at kagome e

When sesshy is the boyfriend?


hana sora (Chapter 71) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Kikyo just cant blame kagome! They are in love with each other. Sesshomaru was likes kikyo but he loves kagome :(


Sessmate (Chapter 71) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Oh wrong story review. ... sweat drop... this story I like but I'm still glad kikyo found out. Let the love birds be free ;)


Sessmate (Chapter 71) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Hey, I like the story but only 3 inconsistencies I found were...first,  kikyo only started dating Sesshomaru AFTER reading kagome's stolen diary, which kikyo stole in the first place out of spite. Second, aren't kagome and kikyo sisters who compete? This chapter calls her cousin.  And lastly,  if they are all in the same grade, are the girls twins? Did Sesshomaru get held back? Otherwise, I really look forward to seeing the next chapter. . :)


MissKatt (Chapter 71) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Oh no :( family drama iS NEVER fun.


sesshomarusama33 (Chapter 71) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Oh no, don't tell me that Kagome's not going to be with him because of Kikyo? I hope not! 


sesshomarusama33 (Chapter 70) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Finally! They admit it! Thank you! What's going to happen now? <3 

 


Pamela (Chapter 69) - Fri 04 Dec 2015

Woohoo! Go Hiro you awesome friend you.  At last Sesshoumaru takes initiative all it took was Kagome saying three little words and his name and he was a goner:)  Love this story. 


actrivi (Chapter 70) - Thu 03 Dec 2015

Sooooo goooood!!!! Hiro was a matchmaking fiend in these last few chapters. Props to him :) Thanks for updating!


Desje (Chapter 70) - Thu 03 Dec 2015

So good! That ending felt so well timed, it had nice build up. Now all i can think about is what will happen in the next chapter. 


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