Nice, just have to work on your spelling and it would have been nice if the mark was of the crescent moon rather than maroon stripes.
rose (Chapter 11) - Fri 25 Sep 2015
next chapter please
Great chap
I'm really enjoying this story. You do have some grammatical errors throughout the chapters though that you may want to look at, or have a beta go through and edit them for you. Can't wait for the next one!
rose (Chapter 10) - Wed 23 Sep 2015
next chapter please
Anonymous (Chapter 10) - Wed 23 Sep 2015
excellent!
This chap was great.
rose (Chapter 9) - Tue 22 Sep 2015
next chapter please
Anonymous (Chapter 9) - Tue 22 Sep 2015
another great chapter
Aw so sweet I loved it.
Saiya (Chapter 9) - Tue 22 Sep 2015
Aaawwww so Sweet.
Deana (Chapter 8) - Mon 21 Sep 2015
Excellent chapters! Can't wait for more.
Anonymous (Chapter 8) - Mon 21 Sep 2015
this story is awesome! i am looking forward to the next update
Yes another great chap.I like the pace of your story. Looking forward to next chapter.
Wow just read the first 5 chapters really good am in looking forward to seeing next chap.
Great story so far.
Wonderful chapter. Where is Shippo? He's usually near Kagome. Can't wait to see what's in store for our little heroine.
Deana (Chapter 4) - Sun 20 Sep 2015
Good story! Is Kagome having premonitions or just bad dreams. Would be interesting to know. Can't wait for next update.
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