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KShadeslady (Chapter 64) - Mon 19 Nov 2018

AWK NO! He better not have hurt Ah-Un!!  The suspense! Good update. 


VS (Chapter 64) - Mon 19 Nov 2018

I was holding my breath. :) Can't wait to finally read about the first confrontation! What is Jaken doing with Sesshoumaru's body? Or is his beast maybe playing with Jaken? :)


KShadeslady (Chapter 63) - Sun 18 Nov 2018

Very nice update. Thanks so much. You have to maintain what little bit might be there. I can only imagine how indignant he must be  

 


ponpiri (Chapter 62) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

Interesting premise, but really, it doesn't make sense for him to be more embarrassed of asking his mother for help versus a human, who would surely cause more issues while ruling in his stead. I'm curious to see why he needed her help specifically or if he was just desperate and figured she would do it with no questions asked.

 

The only criticism I have is too much dialog and the tone of the characters being a bit off. The dialog is too formal for every character, which makes them sound the same. I think that's fine for Miroku and Sesshoumaru, but Kaede has a distinct way of speaking while Kagome is more relaxed.

 

These last few chapters was better in terms of tone, though.


KShadeslady (Chapter 62) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Well, I am all caught up and I’m looking forward to updates. Thanks so much for such an amusing story. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 55) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Ooh gosh! Don’t touch the hair! LMBO! Too funny! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 45) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

I know others have told you already but I will add my voice. I hope you continue on with this charming tale. I think we are all having fun with it. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 39) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Poor Kagome. She’s not going to get away without some questions. And she’s a terrible liar. 

 

Okay here’s a grammar thing. You wrote “Besides, Sesshoumaru-sama apparently requires forthwith my presence...”. Kagome is a modern young woman and probably is not going to use the word forthwith. It’s very archaic. She might have said that Sesshomaru requires my presence now or right now instead. What you wrote isn’t wrong but would she really use that term? 


KShadeslady (Chapter 12) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

OMG! You laughed! There will be retribution...eventually! LOL


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Don’t laugh Kagome...eventually he will get out. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Whoops! So far, very cute and interesting. 


Erica MacKenzie (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Nov 2018

I love where this is going, why did I hesitate? Poor Sesshomaru, but I'm loving the introspection he's having. 


VS (Chapter 60) - Mon 05 Nov 2018

That sounds to me like Sesshoumaru is offering ^^. Nice update. I can't wait to read when Kagome will meet Sesshoumaru's body. :)


princess of the western lands (Chapter 59) - Sun 04 Nov 2018

This is getting good. You have also answered a lot of my questions. Sesshomaru feeling broken without his soul is something kagome can relate deeply relate to. I wonder if jaken is still in the cave or will there be some hilarious moments to come? How will they switch bodies? Perhaps some research in sesshomaru's library or perhaps bokseno-sama but that would mean telling someone else about this incident. I'm looking forward to seeing jaken in his new body.

 

Update soon onegai

Ja ne


Jen kenoha (Chapter 58) - Fri 26 Oct 2018

I love this, I am glad you're writing it and letting us read it!


VS (Chapter 57) - Tue 23 Oct 2018

Hello,

that is a question I thought about too. I mean, did the beast even leave Sesshoumaru's body? Or has Jaken to deal with it now? That would be really interesting!!! :P

You created a really nice and funny story here! And I can't wait to read what is to come!


Sarah (Chapter 56) - Sat 20 Oct 2018

I quite like this story :). I like the premise and thought of Sesshoumaru trying to look dignified in little Jaken’s body lol. Can’t wait for them to meet up with Jaken!


Kat (Chapter 52) - Mon 08 Oct 2018

Well I for one did I miss you. This story is bright and fun.


YukinaBlueRose (Chapter 51) - Thu 13 Sep 2018

I LOVE this story! ! ! ! OXD


YukinaBlueRose (Chapter 45) - Thu 13 Sep 2018

' not interesting'? You think this story is ' not interesting'? ?

... Are you crazy?

I LOVE this story! I find it MAJORLY 'interesting'! OXD


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