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KShadeslady (Chapter 72) - Mon 14 Jan 2019

UH OH! Oh that was funny! Yep! He’s mad! 


VS (Chapter 72) - Sun 13 Jan 2019

You built up that chapter quite well! How it started to get slowly silent and then boom Inuyasha's cry! Well done! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 71) - Sun 06 Jan 2019

Wonderful update! Thanks so much! 


VS (Chapter 71) - Sun 06 Jan 2019

This story gets better and better! Poor Sesshoumaru. How does he feel seeing how easily it was for Kagome to hit him k.o.? What a disgrace! :D

Nice update and Happy New Year!


KShadeslady (Chapter 70) - Thu 27 Dec 2018

Merry Christmas to you also! Thank you for this lovely gift. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 69) - Mon 17 Dec 2018

Good Job Kagome! Thanks for updating. 


Erica MacKenzie (Chapter 68) - Tue 04 Dec 2018

Oh poor Sesshomaru and Jaken what a mess of things for the two. I can't wait to see how Kagome gains control. Thanks for the read!


Jennifer (Chapter 68) - Mon 03 Dec 2018

Update soon!!!!


KShadeslady (Chapter 66) - Mon 26 Nov 2018

AWK!!! Wonderful cliffhanger! You are killing me!!!


KShadeslady (Chapter 65) - Sat 24 Nov 2018

AARRGGHH! Drabbles are killing me! I need more! Please!!


KShadeslady (Chapter 64) - Mon 19 Nov 2018

AWK NO! He better not have hurt Ah-Un!!  The suspense! Good update. 


VS (Chapter 64) - Mon 19 Nov 2018

I was holding my breath. :) Can't wait to finally read about the first confrontation! What is Jaken doing with Sesshoumaru's body? Or is his beast maybe playing with Jaken? :)


KShadeslady (Chapter 63) - Sun 18 Nov 2018

Very nice update. Thanks so much. You have to maintain what little bit might be there. I can only imagine how indignant he must be  

 


ponpiri (Chapter 62) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

Interesting premise, but really, it doesn't make sense for him to be more embarrassed of asking his mother for help versus a human, who would surely cause more issues while ruling in his stead. I'm curious to see why he needed her help specifically or if he was just desperate and figured she would do it with no questions asked.

 

The only criticism I have is too much dialog and the tone of the characters being a bit off. The dialog is too formal for every character, which makes them sound the same. I think that's fine for Miroku and Sesshoumaru, but Kaede has a distinct way of speaking while Kagome is more relaxed.

 

These last few chapters was better in terms of tone, though.


KShadeslady (Chapter 62) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Well, I am all caught up and I’m looking forward to updates. Thanks so much for such an amusing story. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 55) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Ooh gosh! Don’t touch the hair! LMBO! Too funny! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 45) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

I know others have told you already but I will add my voice. I hope you continue on with this charming tale. I think we are all having fun with it. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 39) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Poor Kagome. She’s not going to get away without some questions. And she’s a terrible liar. 

 

Okay here’s a grammar thing. You wrote “Besides, Sesshoumaru-sama apparently requires forthwith my presence...”. Kagome is a modern young woman and probably is not going to use the word forthwith. It’s very archaic. She might have said that Sesshomaru requires my presence now or right now instead. What you wrote isn’t wrong but would she really use that term? 


KShadeslady (Chapter 12) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

OMG! You laughed! There will be retribution...eventually! LOL


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Don’t laugh Kagome...eventually he will get out. 


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