Getting the vignettes set is tough, grammar can weigh down when you want to express a scene... Do not be discouraged, the first draft rarely makes perfect... But that is why this venue is here... You are given the opportunity to find betas and support to be a better writer... Lucky for us the character personality is set creating a believable scenario for those persons is half the fun ... So what its not perfect I read it through and by that you are truly complemented... I look forward to watching you grow as a writer... 

Great job on the challenge and great story! Can't wait to read the next chapter

I wonder who the male voice belongs to, Inuyasha? Sesshoumaru? Naruka? Hojo?

well I'm looking forward to finding out, please update soon, if you can.

next chapter please

HMM... I think Kikyo copied one her contacts, Sesshoumaru to be exact or she was looking to her call and text log for information.  Sneaky Sneaky Kikyo.  I hope Kagome finds out what she did or wanted from her.