Saiya (Chapter 4) - Mon 14 Sep 2015

Wow Poor Kagome i hope you get better.


Debra (Chapter 4) - Sun 13 Sep 2015

Not bad but Inuyasha was still lying. He planned on lying and keeping Kagome too. If anything Kikyo being with him proves Kikyo is obviously even worse than originally thought. She willing kept seeing him knowing what he was doing. I seriously hope that Kagome keeps her distanc from both. he could never be her best friend. Though I hope Miroku is right and that you have Inuyasha seriously regret his involvement with Kikyo. Not just because he hurt Kagome, but because he realized that Kikyo and him was never  the right choice, and that he lost the one person who actually did really love him. Not someone who only cared for him conditionall. Hopefully Karma deals Inuyasha the blow he needs.


Eva (Chapter 4) - Sun 13 Sep 2015

I like this storyline so far. First person narrative can be tricky as we can only know as much about the world and people in it as Kagome observes. It good to be privy to her thoughts as dark as they are.


roberta. (Chapter 4) - Sun 13 Sep 2015

Great chap.


rose (Chapter 4) - Sun 13 Sep 2015

next chapter please


roberta. (Chapter 1) - Sun 13 Sep 2015

What a b****h inu is.


M-Angel 05 (Chapter 4) - Sun 13 Sep 2015

That was a sad couple of chapters but very good. 


Mona (Chapter 4) - Sun 13 Sep 2015

Great!

Holing you are able to update again soon.


angel (Chapter 3) - Thu 06 Aug 2015

Wow inuyasha really did it this time! Poor kagome her heart was shattered along with her warmth and emotions. :( But It was a great story! Job well done!!


Haven (Chapter 3) - Wed 29 Jul 2015

That was simply awesome! I can't wait for further chapters!! -is a fan of your work-


mona (Chapter 3) - Tue 28 Jul 2015

Great!  I very much enjoyed this fanfic so far, I wonder who will be more cold and stoic now, Sesshoumaru or Kagome?  Also, your writing style is good to me if there were any mistakes I did not read any.  Thanks for sharing.


SilverInu93 (Chapter 3) - Tue 28 Jul 2015

this has me begging for more.


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 2) - Thu 02 Jul 2015

Awesome Aweesome Awesome! Im digging this so far. So dramatic and well written. I really cant wait for the next installment

 

Fly


Saiya (Chapter 2) - Tue 30 Jun 2015

wow that was sad. Poor Kagome (hehehe a say Poor Kagome alot) This chapter was neat Inu needs too realize he can't have both.


Angel's Wings (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 May 2015

The first chapter is very promising. I am curious how it will go further. 


Kai Wolf (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 May 2015

Yeah I really like this story so far. Keep up the good work.


Saiya (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 May 2015

Damn like Wow Kikyo's heart grew a little.


rose (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 May 2015

next chapter please


gildedglass (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 May 2015

Wow, this is new! It's Inuyasha wanting to do that and Kikyo feeling guilty, not the other way around? Interesting... I'll be waiting for more.


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