Reviews for Taking Her Destiny by Caedes

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marisel (Chapter 113) - Thu 11 Jun 2015

do continue with the story.  icwant to know about the bracelet and the position kags is ofered.    and what does the seer had to said the sess.   questions  questions??


Eva (Chapter 113) - Thu 11 Jun 2015

Thanks for the clarification. It makes much more sense. The top of each class going through US Marine Corps training has a shot at being promoted to PFC instead of private. That's where the confusion came in for me.


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 112) - Thu 11 Jun 2015

Yay! 


trinity3000 (Chapter 112) - Thu 11 Jun 2015

I was a little irritated with Sesshomaru ' s character in these last few chapters.  I believe Kagome was told if she joined the army she would be treated fairly, but the council just assumed she lied because she was human (unfair).  Then Sesshomaru tells her that he trusts his council, but in the next breath says he knows she should have been ranked 1, but the council slighted her for being human.  So he knows his council is full of bigots, but he is just fine with that.  That makes him a bigot as well.  There is no way he can promote Kagome past her rank without making it look like she did something dishonorable to be promoted, unless he calls out his council for being unfair.  Otherwise he is just setting her up for a lot of hate.  So far it just seems like a really weak move on his part.


Fallingyuki (Chapter 112) - Thu 11 Jun 2015

I'm super duper excited with you.


Debra (Chapter 112) - Thu 11 Jun 2015

Great updates! I can't wait for the next ones.


Mirabar (Chapter 112) - Thu 11 Jun 2015

Love it, love it, love it! Im excited too!  But how can the council believe she lied for power? She had the Shikon no Tama, she had the most powerful thing! ;)


Eva (Chapter 112) - Thu 11 Jun 2015

There will Hell to pay within the fighting force with Kagome jumping rank. Some will never believe she earned her place and cry nepotism. Jena will use this as an opportunity to turn favor against her. She would be challenged repeatedly and disrespected when not with Sesshomaru. Not much good will come of this. I suppose I'm injecting too much reality into this fantasy, but coming from a military family that is what it is like. You don't jump the chain of command. She'll have to do something outstanding to prove her worth.


sesshouscat (Chapter 112) - Wed 10 Jun 2015

ya know for making us wait so long for an update you should have written more instead of

leaveing us at a cliffhanger 

( pouts) and just when it was getting good to

 

 

sighs I  guess I'll just eait and see


DSS (Chapter 112) - Wed 10 Jun 2015

92 chap favriote part "Remo e it miko" it was funny to me I pictured an annoyed/angry shessamoru saying this and will keep looking forward to more chapters! Whoa!


Fallingyuki (Chapter 86) - Wed 03 Jun 2015

What a place to leave us, but your updates were awesome. I'm looking forward to what might happen at the western palace. Have fun on your vacation


Eva (Chapter 86) - Tue 02 Jun 2015

It looks like Kagome's days of anonymity are over. That was a nice little story arc. Thanks for giving Kagome a pack, even for a short time.


Michela (Chapter 86) - Tue 02 Jun 2015

I just started reading any I'm in love!! Hope to read more soon!!


Lynansidhe (Chapter 86) - Tue 02 Jun 2015

I am intrigued by what this new object of power can do. Anywho thanks for the chapters


Mirabar (Chapter 86) - Tue 02 Jun 2015

Yay a new update! It's really too sweet how Kagome is treated by the others. I imagine them going up through the ranks of Sesshoumaru rlly quickly :D! Like they are goingto be the Big 4 of Sesshomarus force ;). And I like how Kagomes is getting more powers by the day. Till wednsday! :)


sesshouscat (Chapter 86) - Tue 02 Jun 2015

( pouts) NO FAIR

ok it's fist but I'm enjoying this too much

:/

pleasee up date soon

 


Saiya (Chapter 86) - Tue 02 Jun 2015

Wow those chapters were AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!


DSS (Chapter 86) - Mon 01 Jun 2015

I really hope theirs an update soon I'm loving this!


Selina (Chapter 86) - Mon 01 Jun 2015

Wow thanks for the updates!! Love the object of power, flippin awesome. I also love your OCs. Its nice to see Kagome kick butt. I am very excited to see where this story goes. Good job!


No Uta (Chapter 86) - Mon 01 Jun 2015

Your A/N of giving up on giving us a count on chapter updates gave me a good giggle. I always look forward to them, for you always have so many. This new object of power, the bracelet is definitely intriguing. It granted Kagome the ability to fight off that Kami by using another. Hmmm... she was able to move him and he was powerless to fight her control over him at that moment. I also like the seer you've introduced. Quite a little pack they have. I wonder what else they'll encounter along the way to Sesshomaru's palace and what will their Lord think of the bracelet of power in Kagome's possession or rather it had laid claim on her. 


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