Reviews for Letters. by Shelby Lee

VivWolf (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Mar 2015

I actually enjoyed this story! I am pleasantly surprised. Origionally I'd skipped it because I wasn't really expecting much but your writing style & plot was cute & well developed. It still feels unfinished...and dare i say even slightly rushed at the end? There where a couple types/grammer errors. But I'm no grammer nazi so I could be wrong :)

 

Keep writing, darling.
You are doing fine! 


VivWolf (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Mar 2015

I actually enjoyed this story! I am pleasantly surprised. Origionally I'd skipped it because I wasn't really expecting much but your writing style & plot was cute & well developed. It still feels unfinished...and dare i say even slightly rushed at the end? There where a couple types/grammer errors. But I'm no grammer nazi so I could be wrong :)

 

Keep writing, darling.
You are doing fine! 


StormieLikeWeather (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Mar 2015

So sweet, loved it.


Katie (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Mar 2015

AWWW! it was sooo cute and i truly loved it!!!


ForgottenOncePromised (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Mar 2015

I loved it! I loved how you brought out a character that most people overlook! Loved how you showed the important moments in Kagome's life in the letters, for her mother to see and then later with the camara! I will admit that I had tears in my eyes... It made me wish I had the ability to call up my mom and dad and talk to them (not for the first time in the many years since their passing) , but still... There are plenty of moments I wished and still wish I could share with them. Stories like this one... hold a special place for me. And this one is among the best ones I've read so far.

-Lyssie!!!


YoukaiLover87 (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Mar 2015

I loved reading this! I thought it was awesome! I loved how you centered it around her mother and let her see all of Kagome through her letters! The end was a nice surpise for her too!


Kahdejus (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Mar 2015

That was really cute. And who cares I figured there was some kind of barrier any way,I'm glad you added the camera.

 


dark (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Mar 2015

this was so amazing.! completely based on a charcter at least to me,who people dont take much interest in. ill txt it...i cried ,icould not help it! im a mom myself and i hope my children love me just as kagome loves her mom! i totally love your story and you dont deserve a simple crappy cookie for it...oh no! your getting a whole cake from ,cause i love it! a fvorite in my list!Uj


Akira (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Mar 2015

This made me so happy ;-; I really enjoyed how you gave kags mom her own spotlight and how she felt. he ending made me reeeaalllllly happy as well *^* I jus thtought I would say that i loved it.


Nicka (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Mar 2015

I  loved it, it was well written.


Knight of Disorder (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Mar 2015

Not bad. A beta would help. There were a couple places where small grammer mistakes broke me out of the story but it's a nice one. Good Job!


Mona (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Mar 2015

Love it and the ending was great.  I would like to read more but idk what could be added.  Maybe something about Shippo and Rin, as well as the other children.  Oh and maybe tell the reunion of Souta and Kagome.


Mz Taisho Sama (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Mar 2015

I must say.... i was very hesitant to read your story, but OMG i am so glad I decided to give it a try, this was just wonderful, you had me smilling, frowning, crying, feeling happy and sad it was crazy!!!, but in a good way crazy. I truly enjoyed reading it,  you did such an amazing job portraiting kagome and her mom relationship, it all made sance (at least to me lol) i can not tell you how happy I am to have read your story. It is 12:45AM here in NC, and I am gonna go to sleep with a HUGE smile in my face, and all thankx to your story. great job, truly amazing really!!


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