Please update soon. I really want to know what happens next!!!!!

I normally do not leave critical reviews however I felt compelled  to this time. I honestly enjoyed this story up to this chapter. I am not a fan of rape scenes at all. However as the writer it is your right to do as you see fit to progress the story and I have read many stories that do this well. I normally skip over the scenes and continue reading. however this scene served no purpose, and was just dumped here. There was no lead up and worst of all you had Inu Tashio and Shessomaru sit and watch..... something that is HIGHLY unlikely. Then they come and save her? Why did they wait? Inu Taisho wouldn't let a man slap her ass but let her get raped??? This just made no sense and Ruined the rest of this story for me. Not because of the scene itself but rather for the lack of true thought behind it. 

Really good first chapter! I really like the idea of a Miko/ demon Kagome! Can't wait to see what happens next

just read the entire story  hope you continue   

next chapter  please

Poor Kagome. Story is very sad. 

Sorry but this is getting to dark for my taste, too many desrciptions of rape.  

next chapter please

smash the spider

quite the read, maybe Kagome opens up about her torment and tells the Taisho of the visions and feel of invasion on her person.  this way they can teach her how to hon in her powers and protect her mind.  once she figures things out and gain some combat skills she will go after Naruka.  either way i can't wait for the update.

This is really good, very interesting start. Great for your first story!

yeah some good news!!!!

yay! Now I don't think everyone will hate you anymore! Yaaaaaaaaaaay!????

some one is going to blow up and mostlikely lose his job and what a creap is he!

Sendai is displeased.. ).) may I ask, why take away the one thing she had?

Waaahhhhhhh!(sniff) (sniff) SHE GOT RAPED! THATS JUST SAAAAADDDDD! WWHHHHHYYYYY! But only you know what will happen later on so everyone will just have to deal with. Even me. TT.TT

I don't get it.  Why did they just watch instead of helping her? I hate to see how naraku will react when he finds out who she's with.

GREAT STORY BUT WHY DIDN'T ONE OF THE INU'S INTERVENE BEFORE NARUKA DEFLOWERED HER?  INSTEAD OF WATCHING WITH DISGUST.

Loveblove love this story so far can't wait for the next chapter. ????

Why cant anything good happen to our kagome  or atleat let some one help her