This has great potential, you just have to work on punctuation. You have too many run on setences, making it confusing and hard to read. Other than that, I really enjoyed these two chapters!
Saiya (Chapter 2) - Sun 04 Oct 2015
Omg did Sesshomaru just Kidnap her. hahahahaha.
Mona (Chapter 2) - Sat 03 Oct 2015
Interesting... Almost seems like a cross over with another anime.
Crystal (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Mar 2015
So will this story be similar to or a crossover with SAO? I'd love it either way! Never encountered a game story with the Inuyasha characters.
Anon (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Mar 2015
Is this going to be like Sword Art online?? I just thought to ask.
nia (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Mar 2015
nextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ccan't wait for the next one~
cmsully (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Mar 2015
... Is this based off of Sword Art Online?
Saiya (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Mar 2015
That was Nice
BakaHentai (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Mar 2015
).) I love it :D hope you make more, I just love the idea of Kagome being a game tester :3 luv Ya! -Hand slowly creeps down-
THis has been good so far. this is gonna prbably remind me of sao. if you need help with mobs or bosses let me know. thank you for combining parts of my favorite animes.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
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