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LibraCourt (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

Awesome chapter. I liked it. Noticed one mix up though. Said she adopted Shippo 4 years ago, but in the talk with Touga she said three years, but good job. Like the company name Haha. 


rose (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

next chapter please


rose (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

next chapter please


Ree-san (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Apr 2015

I'm enjoying the story so far, but the 'mama' stuff is laid on a bit too thick and isn't coming across as natural.  I think it's clear that she adopted him and doesn't need such emphasis.  I look forward for your next update. 


Koree (Chapter 2) - Wed 25 Mar 2015

:( Baka Inuyasha


Saiya (Chapter 2) - Fri 13 Mar 2015

That was Awsome. I'm Excited for the next Chapy


Sarah (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Mar 2015
I don't really why she's so angry with inuyasha if they weren't dating, she liked and she's upset which I can see but since they weren't together being angry with him is over the top. I think shippo should be something else other than the cliche he's her son, instead he can still be adopted but by her mother.

Midnight (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Mar 2015

Can't wait to read more.


Sakura23 (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Mar 2015

I would think it would be more interesting to have Shippo be her birth son. I would establish it maybe as to how far along she is in college- e.i, you say she lives in a dorm but never freshman, sophmore, senior or junior. I know I am staying on campus in dorms for all four years of by degree so it is highly possible for any college year to be in the dorms, it is just not clear. It would also be interesting to see what your thoughts were for either side- e.i how she came to be pregnant or the circumstances for his adoption if she does have/adopt him while still in school.


Elizabeth (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Mar 2015

Shippo should be adopted.

 

Thoroughly enjoying this story!  I hope you can update again very soon!


Sesshomaru's_Mate (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Mar 2015

I belive Shippo should be her birth child it would make it more drama and make it out that she can brith Full blooded Pups or in shippo's case kits and i hope to read more of this story


gildedglass (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Mar 2015

I like the beginning. Very angsty. The dialogue is the only bit I have a problem with. It's too stiff and formal, especially Inuyasha: "I will text you the meeting place." He speaks more like, "I'll text ya the meeting place." Other bits, too, tiny grammatical errors and parts that are grammatically correct, but don't sound quite right. Other than that, this is a great fic! I've only read the first chapter, and I already want to read more :). 


Ree-san (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Mar 2015

I don't really see how Shippo would be either.  It sounds like she's early in college and was living in a dorm.  The story would have to jump a few years for him to even be adopted I think.  Are the kids crucial to the plot?  It's already an established story line that's very interesting.  I look forward to the next update.


LadyBri23 (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Mar 2015

I think that Shippo should be her adopted son. To a great story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next. 


kyo (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Mar 2015

Well I would love for shippo to be her birth child but then he wouldn't have the cute paws and tail... Quite the dilema although birth or adopted her love for him would be the same... I vote birth.(but with sesshomaru's tail)


rose (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Mar 2015

next chapter please


Mona (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Mar 2015

I really like this fanfic, keep'em coming.  Thanks


Moonlight Silk (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 Feb 2015

The drama begins. Like where the story is going. Update soon!!!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Feb 2015

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!


Panther (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Feb 2015

It sounds really interesting, and the friendly scenes between Kags and the band made me laugh!
Keep up the good work :) 


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